Comment from Zinnia48

Good

You write really well, but I have no idea what you are trying to say, or what the connection is between the pieces. It would help if your framed it. I do hope you keep writing, Caroline

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013

Caoline.
H1..
My wife comitted sucide over 11 years ago
after my son Jason's death from a car accident.
Te excerts are fron a Mormon's sense of view.
And my wifes name is..
Caroline ann. smrkovsky.
12-06-1952<><><>11-23-2013.
Sorry.
24.

reply by Zinnia48 on 27-Sep-2013

I am so terribly sorry for such deep loss. Thank you for using poetry and trusting us with the story. I still wish it had been clearer, but do appreciate your courage and ability to write. Be well. Caroline

Comment from tbacha58

Excellent

Now when i need you the most i can't
find you you anywhere..
..But in my heart, where we will never
***************be apart****************
****************J.J******************

Hi 24, this writing is unbelievable, you have such an amazing self confidence, to write as if it happened between one breath to the other. I do believe you are born to write. great job done here. Hugs Terry

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013

Thanks..
AQ better one just posted from a hot dance
club at "The Revel Hotel and Casion"
in Atlantic City, NJ!!