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Nature's Poetic Voice.

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A sensory appreciation of nature.

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Comment from Nichola
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I can imagine what those orchids must have looked like. Your cinquain is so descriptively written, that it hardly needs the picture!

You have imaginative use of language:
Tiny crucifix blooms on show

Nichola

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
    Thank you for your review and support.
    I appreciate your time and comments.
    Those lovely orchids are actually still blooming.
Comment from Jade Lawson
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Have to review from page one in my inbox while I still have broadband issues, will try to go back to past reviews once the issue is fixed.
Really enjoyed reading this one, the colour goes well and adds to the imagery of this poem, good format, love the joy and how the colours enhance the verve in this poem.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
    Thanks for your lovely and generous review.
    I appreciate it.
Comment from adewpearl
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lovely presentation of your poem
vivid descriptive detail
I wasn't sure how the word "lasting" followed from the line before it
I like the explosion of color line for the life it gives this scene
Brooke

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
    Thanks for a generous review and comments.
    "Lasting" was to symbolise that the orchid flowers last for a very long time creating a beautiful display.
Comment from 9999pool
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The lilac orchid puts on an explosive colorful show of vibrant lilac hue. The blooms will last for as long as the weather permits and with tender care they can last for more than three months. Great beautiful plants to brighten and make us joyful seeing such beauty.
Good write and well penned in a Cinquain.
Cheerio, Ritchie. Hugs. :))

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
    Thanks for reading, reviewing and appreciating these lovely blooms with me.
    I appreciate it.
reply by 9999pool on 19-Sep-2013
    Great write about the orchids. Amazing how long they can survive in their blooms - seems to last forever. Smiles.
    Hugs, Ritchie. Cheerio. :))
Comment from Sararb
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Great style of poetry. I enjoyed this beautiful poem a lot. I love orchids, and the beautiful color of lilac. You have done a great job of describing their beauty in this poem. Sararb

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
    Thank you so much for your generous review.
    I appreciate your time and comments.
    This lilac orchid is so lovely and a prolific bloomer.
Comment from songbyrd
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I love the poem, the colors and image you chose..one of my favorite.. obviously you wrote in a certain format and everything worked well. Great!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
    Thanks for a generous review.
    I appreciate your time and comments.
Comment from Treischel
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I love it. I love the photograph as well as the choice and use the Cinquain format. Very expressive presentation of those exquisite orchids. Yes, truly an explosion of color. Very well done

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
    Thank you for reading and reviewing generously. I appreciate your time and comments.
    Orchids are such lovely flowers.
Comment from Sam Mendonca
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I really like the way your took a simple flower and made
such a beautiful poem describing the process.

Perfect artwork and wording.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
    Thank you for a generous review.
    I really appreciate your time.
Comment from Sankey
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Lovely poem and excellent back and photo. Had some orchids on the table at church the other day I didn't know they came in different colours there were two colours there the ordinary one and probably similar one to these in the [photo.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
    Thank you for reviewing and commenting.
    I appreciate your time and generous review.
    Yes, there are several different colours of epidendrums and they are all beautiul when in flower and flower for a long time.
reply by Sankey on 17-Sep-2013
    Yeah I always thought orchids were the "Rolls Royce" or Cadillac if you prefer of flowers... Or are we degrading them by associating them with expensive or classy cars?
Comment from l.raven
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OH Seken, This is just beautiful. I love Roses but Orchids are right at the top of my list. This is very nicely written, and I love the picture.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
    Thank you for reading and reviewing.
    I appreciate your generous review,time and comments.
reply by l.raven on 17-Sep-2013
    You are so welcome...xxoo