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"The Gift of Life."

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True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world

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Comment from tbacha58
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"When will He...
When will He see?
When will he see and talk again to me?

Oh my God, such a sad sad poem. So happy for you that you are writing,
why do we have to go through that much suffering, the worst one death of a child. Take care Bless your family. Terry

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
    Thanks so very, very, much for that!
    You are my #1 fan!
    Ricky 1024
Comment from donkeyoatey
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Again, you share your pain for a good cause. remember, no one is truly gone if someone remembers them, and the recipants of his organs will always be very thankful. Donkeyoatey

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
    Thanks donkeyoatey so very, very, much for that!
    Ricky 1024
Comment from joneau2
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A tuly wonderful tribute to the son you lost. I really enjoyed the unique way in which you wrote it. I could feel your pain, as with your trust in God.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
    joneau2,
    'There is so, very, much more to write...
    For 'Heaven' waits for naught.
    Read my latest...
    "An Angel From a High, Oh, Mount!"
    Thanks,
    Ricky...
reply by joneau2 on 16-Sep-2013
    Will do. John
Comment from Darkhorse555
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RICK THAT WAS AN EXCELLENT PIECE OF WRITING HEARTFELT BEAUTIFUL GOD BE WITH YOU AS I UNDERSTAND HOPING THE STARS SHINES TO THE HEAVENS FOR YOU GOD BLESS

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
    My ability is God sent ...
    I hated poetry in High school.
    Thanks for tha and a gift ..My first written and first competed poem.. a dedication to all of the thousands of Jays friends 11 years ago...
    "Buddy Friend."
    "I'm not here right now but I'm not far...
    I'm in a place not far like a star...
    You'll feel this place, take a moment,
    You'll see...
    Then you will know just where I'll be!"
    'Jay.'{11-05-1984-03-31-2003.}
    c.2003.
    "All Right Copy Written and reserved."
reply by Darkhorse555 on 16-Sep-2013
    AN ANGEL CAME TO ME MY GUARDIAN ANGEL I WROTE A PIECE ON IT I BEGAN WRITING MY MIND SINCE HAS NOT STOPPED GOD BLESSYOU