Leander
poem204 total reviews
Comment from Lastamen
Alright this kid is the perfect demon-seed! (Smile). This is composed way too cool and the photo is the absolute perfect match. Well done and good fortune with the contest.
Till the last amen.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Alright this kid is the perfect demon-seed! (Smile). This is composed way too cool and the photo is the absolute perfect match. Well done and good fortune with the contest.
Till the last amen.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Lastamen, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Sun-E-Day
Another great job. This poem had just great flow and rhythm. As I was reading it in my head, I couldn't help but read it to the tune of a nursery rhyme. Leander does seem like quite the mischief-maker and you captured it all wonderfully. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Another great job. This poem had just great flow and rhythm. As I was reading it in my head, I couldn't help but read it to the tune of a nursery rhyme. Leander does seem like quite the mischief-maker and you captured it all wonderfully. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Sun-E-Day, thank you so very much :-) I so appreciate your generous sixth star and kind contest wishes. Brooke
Comment from marijmd
Dont you take away baby's tickles!! LOL very cute and charming I just loved the read and the rhyme was simply adorable. Great out loud poem.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Dont you take away baby's tickles!! LOL very cute and charming I just loved the read and the rhyme was simply adorable. Great out loud poem.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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marijmd, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Lighthouse Keeper
Great job. I so rarely find a fellow poet-storyteller. This piece is so wonderful. It really dances between the sinister and playful in a perfect way. The end is sublime. I can see this image with my own children so easily.
I'm now going to look through your portfolio for other rhyming tales. That's almost all I do. Would be nice to have a fellow teller to follow.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Great job. I so rarely find a fellow poet-storyteller. This piece is so wonderful. It really dances between the sinister and playful in a perfect way. The end is sublime. I can see this image with my own children so easily.
I'm now going to look through your portfolio for other rhyming tales. That's almost all I do. Would be nice to have a fellow teller to follow.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Thank you so very much, Lighthouse Keeper. I am looking forward to reading more of your story poems too :-) Brooke
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hah! Yeah, I know a few "Leanders" myself, and they're pretty lecherous! Old Lecherous Leanders, we'll call them for conversations sake. You win the lottery, they point out that you're going to lose more than fifty percent of it to Uncle Sam. You buy a new summer home in the Rockies, they'll tell you of a family they read about in yesterdays paper who were mauled in a summer home in the Rockies. Get a new car? No problem, they have all of the recall information on your particular model stored to memory.
Your poem was wonderful, as usual. The rhyming, the message you fun message you convey here, just a wonderfully presented piece!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Hah! Yeah, I know a few "Leanders" myself, and they're pretty lecherous! Old Lecherous Leanders, we'll call them for conversations sake. You win the lottery, they point out that you're going to lose more than fifty percent of it to Uncle Sam. You buy a new summer home in the Rockies, they'll tell you of a family they read about in yesterdays paper who were mauled in a summer home in the Rockies. Get a new car? No problem, they have all of the recall information on your particular model stored to memory.
Your poem was wonderful, as usual. The rhyming, the message you fun message you convey here, just a wonderfully presented piece!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Thank you, Dean. I have never thought of my baby grandson as lecherous, but what the heck. I'm the one who called him an evil thief. LOL Brooke
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LOL, just playin' around, Brooke. Actually, I was speaking of Leander, not Sawyer. I didn't know the poem was actually about him, I just thought you used his pic because of that face, it was perfect, hah-hah!
Comment from NightWriter
OMG, this was so much fun to read! Bravo! Leander is outstanding in every way. That picture is priceless and the poem so captivating! Bravo! This is a classic.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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OMG, this was so much fun to read! Bravo! Leander is outstanding in every way. That picture is priceless and the poem so captivating! Bravo! This is a classic.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Steve, thank you so very much :-) Sending you smiles for that lovely sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from lancellot
That photo just killed me. How do you keep coming up with these? I like the alternating rhymes and the perfect humor. it was complete story right down to the perfect conclusion.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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That photo just killed me. How do you keep coming up with these? I like the alternating rhymes and the perfect humor. it was complete story right down to the perfect conclusion.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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lancellot, thank you so very much :-) My grandson keeps coming up with the looks and my daughter keeps coming up with the photos of the looks. I just look at them and react. LOL I so appreciate your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Irish Rain
just beautiful from beginning to end, your wording is delightful! and the name...Leander fits this troublesome little tyke! blessings to you tonite!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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just beautiful from beginning to end, your wording is delightful! and the name...Leander fits this troublesome little tyke! blessings to you tonite!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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justjo, thank you so much :-) I truly appreciate your generous sixth star and gracious comments :-) Brooke
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you are very welcome!
Comment from donnadiann
Oh, just one cross look, Brooke, probably not too many more, this precious child. But the poem is a doozy, that Leander, ha! Nice nature comparisons and great imagination for this interesting poem:)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Oh, just one cross look, Brooke, probably not too many more, this precious child. But the poem is a doozy, that Leander, ha! Nice nature comparisons and great imagination for this interesting poem:)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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donna, thank you so very much :-) I just love his wide range of looks. The cherubic ones are great, but the silly ones are even better :-) Brooke
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Yes, Sawyer was quite the actor with that one look, ha:) My little Kayelynn is a real character too--she's about two and half.
Comment from GracieAnn
Brooke, this Share A Story In A Poem contest entry has solid and humorous rhythm from beginning to end. The things stolen are appropriate for the level of a child and makes the reader smile. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Brooke, this Share A Story In A Poem contest entry has solid and humorous rhythm from beginning to end. The things stolen are appropriate for the level of a child and makes the reader smile. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Thank you so very much, GracieAnn :-) Brooke
