"The Gift of Life."
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Comment from Ekim777
Time is as well lost in the chaos of our minds. We pace the tread mill and the those illusive concepts of our minds. We are caught between past and future which are both mirages. Time could well be caught in a bottle bobbing on the waves. What am I talking about? The mind is made up of the past. But the past is dead. Therefore our minds are dead. And that is the tragedy of our lives. -Ekim777
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Time is as well lost in the chaos of our minds. We pace the tread mill and the those illusive concepts of our minds. We are caught between past and future which are both mirages. Time could well be caught in a bottle bobbing on the waves. What am I talking about? The mind is made up of the past. But the past is dead. Therefore our minds are dead. And that is the tragedy of our lives. -Ekim777
Comment Written 12-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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This will be finished on a later date
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Thanks Ekim,
Richard.
Comment from denhagan
This was an interesting short story to read. It really was very short--with only a few words. Had a nice picture to accompany the short, short story.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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This was an interesting short story to read. It really was very short--with only a few words. Had a nice picture to accompany the short, short story.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Tis is written but 4 now my brain
remains "smitten" til the hours
after the wee.
Ricky...
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You're welcome,
Dennis