The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Big Day Getting Closer"Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!
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Comment from chasennov
The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go. 'Bliss.' A very good story you have told about your life, and I enjoyed all of it, including how you met Louise. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go. 'Bliss.' A very good story you have told about your life, and I enjoyed all of it, including how you met Louise. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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Hi Thanks for the great review. I did an extra edit of Ch 11 after poeple asked for some changes and additions. chapter 12 is coming.
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You're most welcome.
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G'day I just did 3 more edits to this if you would like to drop by and look again. Seem to get continuing problems with short lines. let me know what you think and it has changed in placesd as well
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You're most welcome, and I will take a look as soon as I have time. Regards.
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Hi friend time seems to be the enemy of us all! Cya round.
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You probably have seen the promotion but I have just done edit 10 to this chapter if you care to look again added a bunch of stuff I had left out before.
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Okay Will look forward to reading it.
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Thanks very much I know you stated you wanted to know when I added anything so here you go. This book of mine has really grown and probably not finished yet. ha! Thanks again!
Comment from michaelcahill
I am so pleased you directed me to this. not a bit long as it captivates and engages the reader and provides a needed break from all the reviews and stars and the like. a wonderful love story well told with humor and feeling all mixed together in the way life is lived. the details are important as they draw us in to the hearts of the people so that we truly care about their happiness and well being. excellent writing my friend. as for the formatting. hahaha. lord is it frustrating or what? happens to me all the time. lines break in the middle etc. a couple typos that someone will mention. they don't bother me. warmest regards, mike
Much tighter now. It wouldn't be a bad idea to break this in half to get more reviews. It's fine for those of us that have already reviewed, but a new reader might be daunted by the length. The promotion is only for the new reviewers so, you want to appeal to them.
Hey. I thought the quality was pretty darned good!! The sound was certainly clear. What a great find. I don't know if you've seen the "Mary Tyler Moore Show" over there. An old show from a ways back. The theme song for that show suits your lovely bride! "Who can turn the world on with her smile..." Google it! Great stuff. Didn't you look pleased as punch!! mikey
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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I am so pleased you directed me to this. not a bit long as it captivates and engages the reader and provides a needed break from all the reviews and stars and the like. a wonderful love story well told with humor and feeling all mixed together in the way life is lived. the details are important as they draw us in to the hearts of the people so that we truly care about their happiness and well being. excellent writing my friend. as for the formatting. hahaha. lord is it frustrating or what? happens to me all the time. lines break in the middle etc. a couple typos that someone will mention. they don't bother me. warmest regards, mike
Much tighter now. It wouldn't be a bad idea to break this in half to get more reviews. It's fine for those of us that have already reviewed, but a new reader might be daunted by the length. The promotion is only for the new reviewers so, you want to appeal to them.
Hey. I thought the quality was pretty darned good!! The sound was certainly clear. What a great find. I don't know if you've seen the "Mary Tyler Moore Show" over there. An old show from a ways back. The theme song for that show suits your lovely bride! "Who can turn the world on with her smile..." Google it! Great stuff. Didn't you look pleased as punch!! mikey
Comment Written 07-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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Hi Thanks again thought I picked this up already hope you will check out the rest of my book. Will be posting chapter 12 soon.
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G'day I just did 3 more edits to this if you would like to drop by and look again. Seem to get continuing problems with short lines. let me know what you think and it has changed in placesd as well
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Hey mate! Here we go again! You probably have seen the promotion but I have just done edit 10 to this chapter if you care to look again added a bunch of stuff I had left out before.
Comment from Selina Stambi
I love the part about you leading her to the Lord and how she taught you to see the beauty within.
A very touching story.
God's timing in everything is perfect, isn't it? And his delays are not denials, but preparation for the best that will surely come. :)
Bless you, Sankey.
Sonali
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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I love the part about you leading her to the Lord and how she taught you to see the beauty within.
A very touching story.
God's timing in everything is perfect, isn't it? And his delays are not denials, but preparation for the best that will surely come. :)
Bless you, Sankey.
Sonali
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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AMEN Friend for sure. Someone has asked me to go into more detail about Louise there is more I could add in another edit as the other reviewer said I did nore detail on the girl I dropped than on Louise whom I married. Stay with me ok!
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G'day I just did 3 more edits to this if you would like to drop by and look again. Seem to get continuing problems with short lines. let me know what you think and it has changed in placesd as well
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hey good friend and Sis in the Lord....You probably have seen the promotion but I have just done edit 10 to this chapter if you care to look again added a bunch of stuff I had left out before.
Comment from Harv
We met in August 1985, and even to this day I don't really know all the trials Louise went through, at home, in our times of getting to know each other. We got engaged on March 26th (in between our birthdays, 25 and 27 March).
We were married at St Albans, in Epping on 14th March,1987.
i know this is an over view of this relationship, but it is the details that i think draw the excitement of the reader to get involved with the great story. Many don't read the encyclopedia version of stories unless studying for something, it felt "enccyclopediaish" as if you were running out of steam to recreate the scenes of such a great story. The beginning was solid. It was like a nice walk turned in to a dash to the finish line, i'd like to go back to that nice walking pace where i can take everything in. Example you were more detailed about the girl you broke up with than the one you married. use the beginning of your story as an example of how you should do all your stories, that was good writing.
blessings javier
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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We met in August 1985, and even to this day I don't really know all the trials Louise went through, at home, in our times of getting to know each other. We got engaged on March 26th (in between our birthdays, 25 and 27 March).
We were married at St Albans, in Epping on 14th March,1987.
i know this is an over view of this relationship, but it is the details that i think draw the excitement of the reader to get involved with the great story. Many don't read the encyclopedia version of stories unless studying for something, it felt "enccyclopediaish" as if you were running out of steam to recreate the scenes of such a great story. The beginning was solid. It was like a nice walk turned in to a dash to the finish line, i'd like to go back to that nice walking pace where i can take everything in. Example you were more detailed about the girl you broke up with than the one you married. use the beginning of your story as an example of how you should do all your stories, that was good writing.
blessings javier
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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Thanks as someone said ages ago Eddit eedit edit...so I will probably get to some of this you are talking about as we go over things. Atm I am going to try and get the Midi file on of the music for Psalm 27 that the lady sang for us at our Wedding won't be her voice unfortunately but I have an organ and piano version of the fabulous tune if the Midi is not too large. Thanks again for the review
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I have just done an edit on Chapter 11 of my book hope you will take a look I was encouraged to say more about my wife and I have now done that.
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G'day I just did 3 more edits to this if you would like to drop by and look again. Seem to get continuing problems with short lines. let me know what you think and it has changed in placesd as well
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You probably have seen the promotion but I have just done edit 10 to this chapter if you care to look again added a bunch of stuff I had left out before.
Comment from BethShelby
I'm glad you found the love of your life and that you were able to lead her to Christ. I'm enjoying your story, but because you aren't promoting it, you're not doing it justice. I'm afraid not many will read a long work for only to 2 cert reward. I don't usually read them myself. Your work deserves to be read and you've read mine so feel I owe you.
stroke enough to aatend and that MUm (attend Mum)
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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I'm glad you found the love of your life and that you were able to lead her to Christ. I'm enjoying your story, but because you aren't promoting it, you're not doing it justice. I'm afraid not many will read a long work for only to 2 cert reward. I don't usually read them myself. Your work deserves to be read and you've read mine so feel I owe you.
stroke enough to aatend and that MUm (attend Mum)
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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Thanks Beth I did promote it with some goodies. Hope folks will see that. Appreciate the review will fix. God Bless off to bed here.
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Hi Friend was not sure you saw the most resent edit for thespagyou mentioned I went backin and they look ok. I appreciate your help. As I think I said I did probvide incentive for some more reviews maybe I forgot to "Promote" it after I added the incentives Iwas surprised initially the chapter gotup befire I had editied it and that I think was due to some local puter problems I was having. back when I was still editing the first run.
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I have just done an edit on Chapter 11 of my book hope you will take a look I was encouraged to say more about my wife and I have now done that.
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G'day I just did 3 more edits to this if you would like to drop by and look again. Seem to get continuing problems with short lines. let me know what you think and it has changed in placesd as well
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You probably have seen the promotion but I have just done edit 10 to this chapter if you care to look again added a bunch of stuff I had left out before.
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer does a good job of gradually drawing the reader into this chapter. The writer transitions the events well as the chapter has good balance. The pace is nice and steady as the writer does a good job of ending this chapter and setting up for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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The writer does a good job of gradually drawing the reader into this chapter. The writer transitions the events well as the chapter has good balance. The pace is nice and steady as the writer does a good job of ending this chapter and setting up for the next chapter.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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Hi there glad you enjoyed it thanks for the great review.
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I have just done an edit on Chapter 11 of my book hope you will take a look I was encouraged to say more about my wife and I have now done that.
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You probably have seen the promotion but I have just done edit 10 to this chapter if you care to look again added a bunch of stuff I had left out before.
Comment from lindalcreel
This was a very interesting read. I always enjoy hearing how people met and fell in love. So glad that you and Louise had something in common. Perhaps there was a little divine intervention. You needed her as much as she needed you. This was a nice story. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2013
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This was a very interesting read. I always enjoy hearing how people met and fell in love. So glad that you and Louise had something in common. Perhaps there was a little divine intervention. You needed her as much as she needed you. This was a nice story. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2013
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AMEN Linda you got that right. I believe right from the tie we were both born God has us picked for each other. Will get a Wedding photo up soon. Thanks very much.
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I posted a pick of me and my hubby. He's mu best friend. so I know what you mean. God Bless:)
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Wedding photo is on now might have been another edit since you read before
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Will look for it.
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I have just done an edit on Chapter 11 of my book hope you will take a look I was encouraged to say more about my wife and I have now done that.
Comment from SHIRLEY LEE
I loved your story. You are a solid writer and should do well with your work. It was most enjoyable reading. Thank you for all the inspiring words. I know God is so good to us and He love us very much. I really can not find fault with your writing. God bless you. Shirl
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2013
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I loved your story. You are a solid writer and should do well with your work. It was most enjoyable reading. Thank you for all the inspiring words. I know God is so good to us and He love us very much. I really can not find fault with your writing. God bless you. Shirl
Comment Written 05-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2013
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Hi Shirley I don't know how it got up so soon I had not done the edit. Come back again later ok Thanks for the review.
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Wedding photo is on now might have been another edit since you read before
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I have just done an edit on Chapter 11 of my book hope you will take a look I was encouraged to say more about my wife and I have now done that.
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You probably have seen the promotion but I have just done edit 10 to this chapter if you care to look again added a bunch of stuff I had left out before.
Comment from Norbanus
Thanks, my friend for sharing this important part of our life with us and for telling us about the delightful Louise. You left us wanting to read more about others in your realm. Pastor Goodman sound like one we will want to know more about.
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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2013
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Thanks, my friend for sharing this important part of our life with us and for telling us about the delightful Louise. You left us wanting to read more about others in your realm. Pastor Goodman sound like one we will want to know more about.
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2013
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hi I was surprised you guys got to see this already I had trouble with it yesterday and thogght it got lost I had not done an initial edit on it yet. Come back later ok Thanks
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Wedding photo is on now might have been another edit since you read before
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I have just done an edit on Chapter 11 of my book hope you will take a look I was encouraged to say more about my wife and I have now done that.
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You probably have seen the promotion but I have just done edit 10 to this chapter if you care to look again added a bunch of stuff I had left out before.
