The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "We all need to step aside some times"Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!
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Comment from Norbanus
Thanks for showing us your history with government service, Sankey. You've shown us how to make the most normal activities interesting
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thanks for showing us your history with government service, Sankey. You've shown us how to make the most normal activities interesting
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Hi mate will get the Midi file on there for the Music I wrote for my poem. I have another one later for when I was back in tax hehe. The poem is mine but it is to the tune of 'When Johnny Comes Marching Home" Remember that one?Did you like the photo of my sweet heart that was our very first photo together in 1985.
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Yes, my friend, I did note the lovely girl in the photo with you. I'll check out the poem/tune
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The Midi file (music) for the song is on Chapter 10 now in case you did not see the note I put on my profile page I also added to Chapter 6 as well.
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New chapter 17 hope you will take the time for a look thanks. You will see chapters have been re-aligned more in order of when things happened. This is a brand new chapter ok.
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer does a good job of keeping the chapter exciting. The writer transitions the events well and does a good job of leading the reader where the reader needs to go. I see nothing that I would add or change in this chapter. Good job.
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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The writer does a good job of keeping the chapter exciting. The writer transitions the events well and does a good job of leading the reader where the reader needs to go. I see nothing that I would add or change in this chapter. Good job.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thanks for that. I think things will liven up a bit from now on.
That photo was taken in 1985 but I might have said that already. Just saw a Poem on the Rapture but the person who wrote it is a Stephen King Fan that threw me a bit! Thanks for stopping by.
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The Midi file (music) for the song is on Chapter 10 now in case you did not see the note I put on my profile page I also added to Chapter 6 as well.
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New chapter 17 hope you will take the time for a look thanks. You will see chapters have been re-aligned more in order of when things happened. This is a brand new chapter ok.
Comment from Eigle Rull
This was written very well my friend. You have obviously been through a lot of training to be able to do all those things. I enjoyed the way you wrote this piece because it's personal, and it's hard not to ramble when things are personal. You kept it clear and concise. It was excellent.
Always with respect,
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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This was written very well my friend. You have obviously been through a lot of training to be able to do all those things. I enjoyed the way you wrote this piece because it's personal, and it's hard not to ramble when things are personal. You kept it clear and concise. It was excellent.
Always with respect,
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thanks so you reckon no Tangents this time huh? Check my profile about my Sis in law's caution on Tangents have you read any of my stuff before? Thanks heaps you are no 1 Reviewer so
far for this chapter.
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The Midi file (music) for the song is on Chapter 10 now in case you did not see the note I put on my profile page I also added to Chapter 6 as well.
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New chapter 17 hope you will take the time for a look thanks. You will see chapters have been re-aligned more in order of when things happened. This is a brand new chapter ok.
