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The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go

Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "We all need to step aside some times"
Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!

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Comment from Sally Law
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Well, this was quite the lead up with all the cat mishaps and adventures. Sorry for all the cat heartbreaks, Geoff. I can see you're an animal lover. You will love my Catzilla stories. I hope post a few more this year. Anyway, it was so good of you to read to the blind. What a great help for those who cannot read the paper anymore of have no special aids to do so. A wonderful calling and ministry. I am actively involved in my Florida chapter for Foundation Fighting Blindness.
All my best to you and Louise,
Sally ,+))

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
    I did aspire to announcing on air but never made it. One day I had a piece to read about a guy in Hospital Emergency that got a bottle stuck up his butt for whatever reasons we won't go into but I could not help laughing on air and the announcer had to take over. I did not last long on that job it was during a time I had skipped church for about six weeks as I may have mentioned.
Comment from MelB
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Hi Geoff, another interesting chapter to your story. I would have been a nervous wreck to appear on a talk show. Karen Carpenter had an amazing voice!

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
    I loved the Carpenters, their harmonizing and all that. I was a bit disappointed Louise could not get the same pleasure due to her deafness she was unable to hear the different parts. Thanks for the lovely review.
reply by MelB on 09-Apr-2017
    You're most welcome.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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It is so hard to lose a pet. In the US we still have issues with women of other countries, usually third world or communist countries, trying to marry American men, usually soldiers to gain US citizenship and then divorce, too.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
    Yeah well I felt like this was what he was involved in, for his own personal gain too. Glad God protected me from that. Thanks again.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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LOved the addition of the stories of the furry, feathered family friends. those are always the best stories of life and the interactions and define a person and their life

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
    Thanks barb Mastery has given me some good ideas for adding more info to the chapters in Author notes and background I have gone right back to the start to do those.
Comment from Mabaker
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You know Dr Sankey I can take any amount of red-penning from a cat
person. Yer a winner Mate! God protect people like you. Sincerely Anne.
Mabaker has a motto she lives by; You earn 'em you get 'em. You do.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
    Good one mate. Keep at it. I love your stuff too. mastery has given me some help in regs to adding more to Author Notes and background to the chapters I have gone right back and started that from the start on this book.
Comment from c_lucas
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There was very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Very good job of writing.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
    Thanks Bro Charlie how are you doing dear man? Bob (Mastery) has given me some excellent advice and I am working on applying it in adding more to the chapters about the persons in them and more on the backgrounds of current chapters.
reply by c_lucas on 07-Apr-2017
    Recovering from surgery.
Comment from judiverse
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How interesting. I hadn't read this part before. I enjoyed the stories about your kittens. Sad that they ran off, never to return. That happened to a kitten I had many years ago. The ones I have now I keep indoors. You seemed to have success with your jobs, as you rated promotion. Interesting about your experience with the radio program. It must have been a joy to you to read the news for the print handicapped. I think this is very well developed. A nice touch to include the reading. judi

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
    Thanks Judi as I mentioned I am, going back and adding synopsis of past chapters as Bob suggested.
Comment from Sasha
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Very nice work with this chapter. You have had an interesting life. Ee all have had to step aside at one time or another. Sorry about your pets, I do hope the were just picked up and moved to a new home, not used as bait for dog-racing.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
    Yeah Sasha I would hope you were right. I felt so unfaithful after PinnyII disappeared getting Mitty the one and only Female Tortoiseshell cat I ever had...sadly she disappeared too. Bob (Mastery has suggested I put a Synopsis of my pasto Chapters on each chapters so working on that he says to interest new readers.
Comment from Mastery
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Hi, Geoff. I liked this chapter a lot better than the previous one. You hav eled an interesting younger life, my friend. I was on air radio form five years when I was in my twenties. It's notm a very good paying job unless you hit the big time.

Interesting storytelling.

Suggestion: (You will find it very difficult Geoff, to find anyone that interested time wise to go back and read all previous chapters, therefore I recommend you write a very brief synopsis above each new chapter for the sake of new readers which you will pick up all the time hopefully. ( You need only do it once..after that just copy and paste to each new post.) Also, put a list of characters at the bottom of your chapters...again this only need be done once and updated with the addition of any new character or person involved.


Blessings. Bob



 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
    Sounds like a good idea mate. I used to do a summary of old chapters I got the current format from someone else but always open for new suggestions. Will work on it. Up early again today like dear old Anne (Mabaker...hehe)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written chapter of your life story. We can be er k ow where our paths will go until we are there in the situation. I also worked at a tax office for about nine months before we move to another town.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
    Thanks Sis Sandra appreciate you coming along. Bob Mastery has made suggestions I will look into as well.