The Price of Chemical Warfare
one/nine/one poem16 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz
We could supply gas masks while looking at other options. I have been monitoring this as much as I can on television. Thank you for using these few syllables to say so much.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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We could supply gas masks while looking at other options. I have been monitoring this as much as I can on television. Thank you for using these few syllables to say so much.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thank you for this review, and if you are watching the news you can see it's getting worse by the minute. Your first sentence is spot on!
Comment from Gungalo
child
dies breathing evil air - anyone
care?
I care!! I care a lot and wish we would or could do something about it. It's very sad that this happens. Sigh.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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child
dies breathing evil air - anyone
care?
I care!! I care a lot and wish we would or could do something about it. It's very sad that this happens. Sigh.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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It is a very sad situation, and it could be on our doorstep any no one seems to see that. Thank you for the review.
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Sigh
Comment from Dean Kuch
The current situation in Syria is, indeed, a dire one. The usage of these types of chemical weaponry is barbaric and beyond most of our won comprehensions...
Nice way to get the point across!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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The current situation in Syria is, indeed, a dire one. The usage of these types of chemical weaponry is barbaric and beyond most of our won comprehensions...
Nice way to get the point across!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the review and observation. Apparently, not many feel as we do.
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That's a shame...
Comment from amanda98653
A poem that consists of little words but conveys a big meaning. it's sad to know that a lot of countries are spending billions on chemical weapons and neglecting their citizens. A world od injustice. Sigh.
-AJ
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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A poem that consists of little words but conveys a big meaning. it's sad to know that a lot of countries are spending billions on chemical weapons and neglecting their citizens. A world od injustice. Sigh.
-AJ
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Agree, and thank your for the great review.
Comment from Sueellen11
My friend, you are on a winner with this entry, so fresh in everyone's mind, and with the possibility of a third word war looming, yes we care, but we the people have no say, this could have happened in our own back yard from any radical home grown, well done, great entry , good luck, blessings, sueellen
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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My friend, you are on a winner with this entry, so fresh in everyone's mind, and with the possibility of a third word war looming, yes we care, but we the people have no say, this could have happened in our own back yard from any radical home grown, well done, great entry , good luck, blessings, sueellen
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Exactly, Sueellen, we are becoming so isolated and yet together. This could happen any where. Thank you for the review.
Comment from kiwijenny
Evil air......what a horrid reality to deal with....oh bow our heads and pray ...what you have done in 11'syllables is astounding......is your house decorated minimalistically?
God bless
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Evil air......what a horrid reality to deal with....oh bow our heads and pray ...what you have done in 11'syllables is astounding......is your house decorated minimalistically?
God bless
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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No, my house is not minimalistic lol But I do love your review, until this evil is on our doorstep we won't care. Thank you for the great review
Comment from reconciled
I think this should have the highest score you can give.I wish I had one to give you..****************It makes me crt everytime I even think of what has happened. What is wrong with people??what are their hearts?? your words very powerful
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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I think this should have the highest score you can give.I wish I had one to give you..****************It makes me crt everytime I even think of what has happened. What is wrong with people??what are their hearts?? your words very powerful
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much. I feel the same way, and your words are worth any higher score.
Comment from poesyapprentice
Your write is perfectly counted and holds some umph. Thanks for the notes, although asking for a very low score was odd. The loss of the children is so very sad-- the truly innocent caught in the middle of grownup's crap and paying the ultimate price. Does anyone care, indeed.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Your write is perfectly counted and holds some umph. Thanks for the notes, although asking for a very low score was odd. The loss of the children is so very sad-- the truly innocent caught in the middle of grownup's crap and paying the ultimate price. Does anyone care, indeed.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Thank you, for the great review. The reason for "asking for the low score" was I didn't want to get into a political discussion, as this is my opinion. I would rather, is some didn't like the message they spoke through their ratings.
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Wasn't clear on that, but gotcha. Good luck!
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a one - nine - one that deals with the very real killings going on in Syria that no one, including the UN, will intercede in.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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This is a one - nine - one that deals with the very real killings going on in Syria that no one, including the UN, will intercede in.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Exactly, my point. I don't want to go to war, but we have to do something.
Comment from Jackarrie
I wish I had a six for your politics, it is a disgrace how anybody involved in this killing of children can sleep at night.
Thank you for highlight it in such a sad but brilliant way.
Well done and good luck in the competition. Mary
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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I wish I had a six for your politics, it is a disgrace how anybody involved in this killing of children can sleep at night.
Thank you for highlight it in such a sad but brilliant way.
Well done and good luck in the competition. Mary
Comment Written 31-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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I know, we've become a society of isolation. The sad thing is this could all be on our "doorsteps" in the near future. Thank you so much for "getting" the essence of my poem.