Mike Radshaw and the Black Dawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Sugarland Saga - BD6"The grim reaper casts his pall over London
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your last sentence is very truthful. I say it as 'be care what you pray for you just might get it.' I know when I got pregnant with my last child I must have been praying for patience. He was sent here to teach it to me. LOL
"I can help you, as long as you pwomise not to eat me." (promise, or was it intentional?)
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Your last sentence is very truthful. I say it as 'be care what you pray for you just might get it.' I know when I got pregnant with my last child I must have been praying for patience. He was sent here to teach it to me. LOL
"I can help you, as long as you pwomise not to eat me." (promise, or was it intentional?)
Comment Written 25-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
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Lol, I have all that to come! Thank you, Barbara - I'm really glad you liked the chapter. We're nearing the end of this Radshaw tale. Then I'll be on to something new.
Mike
Comment from Uniqusatya
Hey,great story here,supernatural fiction,you mean fantasy fiction.Your title is sweet and picture is scary....and overall its a good read.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Hey,great story here,supernatural fiction,you mean fantasy fiction.Your title is sweet and picture is scary....and overall its a good read.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thanks, Uni! Really happy you enjoyed the read :-).
Mike
Comment from Sasha
I most definitely enjoyed. Love the sticky creature with the speech impediment. Now I just have to wait find out what is waiting for Radsahaw..bet it's a grisly. Very nice work with this one.
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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I most definitely enjoyed. Love the sticky creature with the speech impediment. Now I just have to wait find out what is waiting for Radsahaw..bet it's a grisly. Very nice work with this one.
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Lol, you know me so well :-). Apologies for the slow reply - been of site of necessity. Indeed, Mike has grim times ahead, so it's just as well he had done silliness to prepare him!
Mike
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer does a good job of drawing the reader into this dark chapter. The writer transitions the events well as the writer uses a pace that intensifies as the chapter goes on. The writer does a good job of ending this chapter and setting up for the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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The writer does a good job of drawing the reader into this dark chapter. The writer transitions the events well as the writer uses a pace that intensifies as the chapter goes on. The writer does a good job of ending this chapter and setting up for the next chapter.
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you, RR - I'm really glad you enjoyed the read :-).
Mike
Comment from adewpearl
background section: it's own domain - drop the apostrophe
love the description of the breeze
I'm laughing at his reaction to Hello, Wadshaw LOL
a mini pink minotaur with a lisp - only you, Mike, could conjure such a thing
I love Radshaw's smart alecky personality and his retorts
a most enjoyable chapter :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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background section: it's own domain - drop the apostrophe
love the description of the breeze
I'm laughing at his reaction to Hello, Wadshaw LOL
a mini pink minotaur with a lisp - only you, Mike, could conjure such a thing
I love Radshaw's smart alecky personality and his retorts
a most enjoyable chapter :-) Brooke
Comment Written 25-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Lol, thanks so much, Brooke :-). This chapter veered very much to the nuts, but hopefully I still retained the Radshaw essence. He's got some grim moments shed so he needed the comedy relief!
Mike
