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The Secret Garden-(Free Verse)

Venturing into a dream garden

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Comment from bard owl
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Wouldn't it be wonderful if every mortal had a secret garden where they could go to renew the happiness in their soul? I enjoyed the upbeat nature of this poem. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2013

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Comment from maduechesi
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hahahahahahaha. You should be careful how you enter the garden remember is a secret garden. Please donot mind just joking. I love the poem is a nice work. It also has a good imagery work,the writer really gave us how the door is, and also how beautiful the garden is. Nice work keep it up

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

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Comment from TAB_that's me
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This is a great entry for the contest. you paint a beautiful picture with your words. Good luck in the contest.
~Teresa~

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

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Comment from SteveY
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Well this is certainly a beautiful piece of writing. I was suspecting something scary from the initial descriptions in the first two stanzas but then a pleasant surprise!

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

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