Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "The Warrior "This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
32 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about challenges that come our way from time to time that we have to fight against before they may consume us, when we need help, God will stand and fight along with us.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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A very well-written poem about challenges that come our way from time to time that we have to fight against before they may consume us, when we need help, God will stand and fight along with us.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your pleasant review. You're right, we have a lot to fight against the forces of evil but "greater is He that is in you, than he that is in the world." The Bible is full of promises for encouragement and faith.
Comment from royowen
That's what happens when things become tough, everything seems to present it's face in she's of grey, the only person that knows what will happen a can guide and turn, it's the Holy Spirit, a beautifully writt slightly differing meter, but pretty even meter. And aabb rhyme, well done, blessings. Roy
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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That's what happens when things become tough, everything seems to present it's face in she's of grey, the only person that knows what will happen a can guide and turn, it's the Holy Spirit, a beautifully writt slightly differing meter, but pretty even meter. And aabb rhyme, well done, blessings. Roy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review of my poem. It was a hopeful read and I really appreciate it.
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Good job
Comment from kahpot
Yes, we all need help sometimes and the courage to ask for it, we do know He here is there always, and our belief in ourselves of picking up and continuing our power with some help, an excellent read, thank you very much for sharing****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Yes, we all need help sometimes and the courage to ask for it, we do know He here is there always, and our belief in ourselves of picking up and continuing our power with some help, an excellent read, thank you very much for sharing****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your review. You're right in what you say. We must be willing to ask the Lord for help and that takes faith. I really appreciate your insight. I hope you find the same in my other poems.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
`Once again my friend you have written a powerful poem.
I sure many can relate and felt the hardship with in each line
You Captured my attention from the first line to the last
thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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`Once again my friend you have written a powerful poem.
I sure many can relate and felt the hardship with in each line
You Captured my attention from the first line to the last
thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you, once again, Cookie, for an inspiring review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Your very welcome, take care.
cookie
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks about a winning-positive warrior who believes to fight with God's power and light within as he is confident of ruling and reigning with Jesus in his heavenly domain; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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This poem speaks about a winning-positive warrior who believes to fight with God's power and light within as he is confident of ruling and reigning with Jesus in his heavenly domain; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thanks for this inspiring and helpful reaction. It is really helpful to get such an understanding view. God bless you.
Comment from SimplyaStudent
I really enjoyed reading this well written poem that you have here. Those who believe in Jesus and God are all soldiers for his cause, and I hope we give the devil a good fight before the end.:) SS
P.S As of seeing what you like to write about, would you read my poem Archangel? I think you would like it.:)
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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I really enjoyed reading this well written poem that you have here. Those who believe in Jesus and God are all soldiers for his cause, and I hope we give the devil a good fight before the end.:) SS
P.S As of seeing what you like to write about, would you read my poem Archangel? I think you would like it.:)
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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Thank you so much for such a great reaction, especially about licking the devil and keep fighting. Yes, I'll read your poem Archangel. Look forward to it. Keep fighting. SimpleStudent
Comment from Cajungirl
Thank you. What a joyous read, especially for a Sunday morning. No wonder this is a Recognize piece. It is simply beautiful.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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Thank you. What a joyous read, especially for a Sunday morning. No wonder this is a Recognize piece. It is simply beautiful.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much for your very helpful and encouraging review. Glad it was an inspiration to you and feed your soul. KGB
Comment from Glasstruth
Like the idea of a warrior who fights to win, especially since she's a good warrior. The rhyming and flow is very smooth. The message is simple and clear. Wonderfully written. Les
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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Like the idea of a warrior who fights to win, especially since she's a good warrior. The rhyming and flow is very smooth. The message is simple and clear. Wonderfully written. Les
Comment Written 13-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review. It was really beautiful to read. Yes, these good warriors are going to win in the end so they must be strong. Gb
Comment from RGstar
A beautiful sentiment for faith, but also beautiful as a message in life.
That which applies to heaven is a perfect antidote for that which could also apply to where we are today, and that which surrounds us.
You have delivered this message with faith and clarity.
I love the image you have chosen. If you have time , take a look at my poem 'Eden' and 'This Cold Ground Is Not Where I lay''
I enjoyed this Poem.
Please have a good day
RGstar
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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A beautiful sentiment for faith, but also beautiful as a message in life.
That which applies to heaven is a perfect antidote for that which could also apply to where we are today, and that which surrounds us.
You have delivered this message with faith and clarity.
I love the image you have chosen. If you have time , take a look at my poem 'Eden' and 'This Cold Ground Is Not Where I lay''
I enjoyed this Poem.
Please have a good day
RGstar
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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Thank you RGstar for your heartfelt and beautiful review. It really touched my heart. Gb
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My pleasure :)
Comment from allborn66
This is a very powerful poem. The tone is appropriate to the subject matter. You communicate your theme well. The word choice is strong.
Barbara
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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This is a very powerful poem. The tone is appropriate to the subject matter. You communicate your theme well. The word choice is strong.
Barbara
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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Thank you Barbara for your very good review. It was very encouraging and helpful to me. Gb