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Nature's Poetic Voice.

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A sensory appreciation of nature.

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Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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It's it amazing how God made things? Who would think an ugly caterpillar would become a beautiful butterfly. Very well written, enjoyed it. Rox

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
    Thanks so much for a generous review and comments. I appreciate it.
Comment from Jade Lawson
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I enjoyed very much to read this poem you created, beautiful word choice describing a change from a caterpillar to a butterfly. This can also be interpreted in many ways such as someone who needs to set herself free to be happy.
Beautiful artwork.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
    Thank you. I appreciate yopur review and comments.
reply by Jade Lawson on 21-Aug-2013
    welcome
Comment from tbacha58
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Hi, Even a beautiful butterfly you write a poem that would overwhelm it, if it understood your writ. But we do instead, that is a beautiful verse, so well written, one feels there must be no end. I enjoyed reading it. Hugs Terry. xx

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
    Thanks for your continued support and generous review.
    I appreciate your time and comments
Comment from Jean Lutz
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I've been told that is the struggle to break from the cocoon that develops the beauty of the butterfly. Something to consider. Lovely words and picture.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
    Thank you for reviewing and commenting. I appreciate your time.
    Yes, I have been receiving all sorts of information since I wrote this poem. I tried to keep it simple though.
Comment from watergirl
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Yes, the morphing of a caterpillar into such a wonderfully different thing. Amazing! You write about it eloquently.
Well done on a nice poem.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
    Thanks. I appreciate your review and support.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
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This is a beautiful poem that the author has crafted with this piece of writing. The writer tells a beautiful story to the reader here. I heard recently that a caterpillar doesn't change into a butterfly, but completely dissolves and a new butterfly is created from the glue. Amazing.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
    Thanks for a great review and comments.
    That's interesting and in scientific terms probably true.
reply by Tomes Johnston on 19-Aug-2013
    It was my pleasure.