"The Gift of Life."
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "The Warming Tree."True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world
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Comment from Darkhorse555
that was such an amazingly beautiful heartfelt piece smiling with the angels in gods loving care you done her so very proud god bless
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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that was such an amazingly beautiful heartfelt piece smiling with the angels in gods loving care you done her so very proud god bless
Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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A great and needed write to a woman who's life was cut short.
It came naturally and I think She helped to a degree cause 11 years and brain damage can dissipate the thoughts of the past...
Ricky.
Comment from tbacha58
What a beautiful and wonderful gift your writing about her spirit and soul, and you did it in a lovely honest sincere pen. I don't know her but i felt her existence through you. Marvelous pen enjoyed it, sad, but loved it. Hugs Terry.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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What a beautiful and wonderful gift your writing about her spirit and soul, and you did it in a lovely honest sincere pen. I don't know her but i felt her existence through you. Marvelous pen enjoyed it, sad, but loved it. Hugs Terry.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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Well deserved, well needed, and
absolutely written with Her help...
Thanks!
Ricky.
Comment from mrskristinball
Beautiful flow and unique rhyming pattern...this poem is meant to be read aloud. Your elegy for Emily is perfect in message and mood and a truly lovely lament for a person I never knew, but I feel a loss for all the same. A few typos and misspellings here and there, which I was able to easily correct while reading, kept me from giving you a six on your fantastic memorial poem.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013
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Beautiful flow and unique rhyming pattern...this poem is meant to be read aloud. Your elegy for Emily is perfect in message and mood and a truly lovely lament for a person I never knew, but I feel a loss for all the same. A few typos and misspellings here and there, which I was able to easily correct while reading, kept me from giving you a six on your fantastic memorial poem.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013
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Thanks, I'm still on it.
Richard.
Ricky1024
Comment from Iese
Your words move with fluidity and capture my imagination of such detail and talent. I enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for sharing. I hope that you return such gratitude and be inspired by checking out my work. Awesome prose. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013
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Your words move with fluidity and capture my imagination of such detail and talent. I enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for sharing. I hope that you return such gratitude and be inspired by checking out my work. Awesome prose. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013
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Thanks and I will in ten!
Richard.
Ricky1024.