Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the falling leaves, i enjoyed reading this one. good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013

Thank you for the kind review

Comment from 4tun81

Excellent

autumn's leaves falling
for winter's hibernation
insulate the ground

This meets the requirements of the contest. Good luck and thanks for posting.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013

thank you.

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

The presentation of this Haiku is excellent. The syllable count is right and the words carry a description that is very vivid and clear. Your words come alive here.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013

thanks!

Comment from MissMerri

Exceptional

What a beautiful and original thought! I have never thought of this before, so reading your poem was like a wonderful "ah-ha" moment for me. It is in perfect form and says so much in a few words. I'm terribly impressed. Best of luck in this contest. I Imagine it will do quite well.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013

Thank you for the review and the vote of confidence.

Comment from vapros

Excellent

This is a five star verse to enter in the contest. I just wrote a review and awarded four stars. Did you edit the entry by inserting the word 'autumn', or did I miss it? Sorry about that -

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 Comment Written 15-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013

no I didn't edit it. Thanks for the great review.

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

Excellent job in writing this one. I like the thought of leaves falling to insulate the ground. Very poetically descriptive. Great job.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013

thank you