My Favorite Time Of Year
Contest Entry31 total reviews
Comment from Titanx9
Congratulations! I can see why you won because this one is clever and witty. The accompanying picture is the perfect complement for the poem. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Congratulations! I can see why you won because this one is clever and witty. The accompanying picture is the perfect complement for the poem. Nicely done!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you my friend for your great review. Have a nice day. Bill
Comment from ravenblack
Just make sure
Any knot holes
Don't contain
Wasps or bees
( sorry,
Couldn't resist)
Seriously though,
Where would you
Slip a tree
A ten
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Just make sure
Any knot holes
Don't contain
Wasps or bees
( sorry,
Couldn't resist)
Seriously though,
Where would you
Slip a tree
A ten
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thanks my friend for the laugh. You're right, slipping a ten in a hole could be dangerous in more ways then one. Have a great day.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Hi, Bill. I see why this great poem won the contest. It is really delightful. In fact, I found the satori quite humorous. Congrats on a well-deserved win.
Bev
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Hi, Bill. I see why this great poem won the contest. It is really delightful. In fact, I found the satori quite humorous. Congrats on a well-deserved win.
Bev
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Hello old friend. It's been awhile since I've spoke with you. Thanks for your review and I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Take care of yourself and keep writing. Bill
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You're very welcome, Bill. :0) Bev
Comment from elchupakabra
Easy to see why this was the contest winner, this clever piece is humorous and makes great use of the classic double entendre. It seems enough people have fawned over this work so I'll just say it's perfect as is, I wouldn't change a thing, great work and kudos on the contest win.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Easy to see why this was the contest winner, this clever piece is humorous and makes great use of the classic double entendre. It seems enough people have fawned over this work so I'll just say it's perfect as is, I wouldn't change a thing, great work and kudos on the contest win.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Thanks my friend for your nice comments, I appreciate it. Have a great day. Bill
Comment from mauial
That is an interesting comparison of autumn doing a strip to bare the limbs of trees. I think this is very well written and imaginative.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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That is an interesting comparison of autumn doing a strip to bare the limbs of trees. I think this is very well written and imaginative.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you my friend for your nice comments, I appreciate it. Have a great day. Bill
Comment from watergirl
Ha! A lovely poem about the nature of trees. I liked reading it, it seemed light yet so true. Good work here.
The artwork is so apt; a lovely illustration, and warm.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Ha! A lovely poem about the nature of trees. I liked reading it, it seemed light yet so true. Good work here.
The artwork is so apt; a lovely illustration, and warm.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you my friend for your review, I appreciate it. Have a great day. Bill
Comment from Dean Kuch
Brilliantly done, Cedar! How did I miss this particular contest. Oh no, no to enter, but to vote! Fall, and everything about the season, thrills me to the very core!
The dying tree leaves and fauna, bursting into brilliant, vibrant colours, as if to give one last hurrah before old man Winter encases the world in ice.
Well, no wonder this entry won the contest. It is very well done.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Brilliantly done, Cedar! How did I miss this particular contest. Oh no, no to enter, but to vote! Fall, and everything about the season, thrills me to the very core!
The dying tree leaves and fauna, bursting into brilliant, vibrant colours, as if to give one last hurrah before old man Winter encases the world in ice.
Well, no wonder this entry won the contest. It is very well done.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Thanks Dean for your nice comments, I appreciate it my friend. Fall is my favorite time of the year also. Take care and have a great day. Bill
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My pleasure, Bill...
Comment from Martin Chan
" An Autumn Strip Show," is a 5-7-5 format poem written about Autumn, which is a winner for the Ode To Autumn contest. A good imagination illustrating a good scene of the Autumn.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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" An Autumn Strip Show," is a 5-7-5 format poem written about Autumn, which is a winner for the Ode To Autumn contest. A good imagination illustrating a good scene of the Autumn.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you Martin for your review, I appreciate it. Have a great day my friend Bill
Comment from gaangel62
You did an excellent job explaining the coming of autumn...with a cute twist....thanks for sharing and congrats on winning the contest...Hugs....Angie
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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You did an excellent job explaining the coming of autumn...with a cute twist....thanks for sharing and congrats on winning the contest...Hugs....Angie
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you Angie for your nice comments, I appreciate it. Have a wonderful Sunday. Bill
Comment from Righteous Riter
This is a brilliant piece. This piece meets the criteria of the 5-7-5. The syllable count is correct as the photo compliments the piece well. The words bring the photo to life as I congratulate you on your win.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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This is a brilliant piece. This piece meets the criteria of the 5-7-5. The syllable count is correct as the photo compliments the piece well. The words bring the photo to life as I congratulate you on your win.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thank you my friend for your review. I appreciate your nice comments. Bill