The Power of One
Where does true power come from27 total reviews
Comment from Antoine Charlemaine
You have quite an imagination! You kept me reading in suspense to the end. Thank goodness for Li Ming! I enjoyed this little read and the images it conjured up. Thanks.
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You have quite an imagination! You kept me reading in suspense to the end. Thank goodness for Li Ming! I enjoyed this little read and the images it conjured up. Thanks.
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Thank you
Comment from amanda98653
This is a beautiful story..i like it a lot
"You're not like them"I stopped
Humanity can be saved by both faith and love
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013
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This is a beautiful story..i like it a lot
"You're not like them"I stopped
Humanity can be saved by both faith and love
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
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Thank you. Any suggestions to improve it would be appreciated.
Comment from Sankey
Great story. Had to figure out if it was about a bird or a human. My guess is the story is all about bullying and being bullied. In School of course. But of course this person being bullied was n o ordinary person huh!
Thanks for a good story.
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Great story. Had to figure out if it was about a bird or a human. My guess is the story is all about bullying and being bullied. In School of course. But of course this person being bullied was n o ordinary person huh!
Thanks for a good story.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
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Thank you for taking the time to read it.
Comment from watergirl
Hmmmm.....interesting, I had to think about this. One can use power in many ways. All of which have their consequences. And some things come visit us, without our asking. Good job on a short story, I liked it.
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Hmmmm.....interesting, I had to think about this. One can use power in many ways. All of which have their consequences. And some things come visit us, without our asking. Good job on a short story, I liked it.
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Thank you
Comment from kiwigirl2821
This is an interesting story to add to this contest. I'm not sure how the supernatural is implied unless it is in the "Fates" but I enjoyed it very much. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
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This is an interesting story to add to this contest. I'm not sure how the supernatural is implied unless it is in the "Fates" but I enjoyed it very much. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
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Thank you
Comment from Asyraf N. Jamsari
A very well written story. I really like the concept and the anticipation. Well done with the flow and story plots. Simple vocabulary and vividly delivered. Keep up the good work
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A very well written story. I really like the concept and the anticipation. Well done with the flow and story plots. Simple vocabulary and vividly delivered. Keep up the good work
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Thank you
Comment from JB Lynn
Brilliant! You had me from the very first line of this story and I was hooked until the end. I kind of like that you leave things a little arbitrary - what is he, exactly? It gives our imaginations license to daydream for ourselves.
Thank you for sharing, and good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013
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Brilliant! You had me from the very first line of this story and I was hooked until the end. I kind of like that you leave things a little arbitrary - what is he, exactly? It gives our imaginations license to daydream for ourselves.
Thank you for sharing, and good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
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Thank you very much
