Comment from donkeyoatey

Excellent

organ donation is very important, and how nice of you to bring it to our attention in such a dramatic way! Some part of your son lives on..some part will achieve great ness! Donkeyoatey

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013

Thanks donkey.
My book written two Summers ago "The Gift Of life"
will shake up and wake up this heartless livers in
NJ. and NY.
{the two worst states for organ tissue donation in the US!} Ricky.

Comment from EMB

Excellent

If there's some truth to these details, this is a pretty sobering and sad piece. But it shows strength and resolve to carry on, despite the pains of the past.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013

Read my just posted piece, Ed
called "I Spit On The Your Faceless Face!"
Thanks,
Ricky.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

I am giving this five stars both for its personal aspect and also for the deep sadness it portrays. You wrote this in ten minutes you say, it could easily have been a day. From the first 3 lines I felt your sorrow and pain. written beautifully with a rich array of words that compliment the piece fully. I would like to have enjoyed it as just a piece within itself but the sorrow embedded is clear and for this I say well done and best wishes.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013

Thanks and my latest post "I Spit On Your Faceless Face!"
will allow you deeper and more access to my amazing last
11 years.
Ricky.

Comment from ClaireinaHeart

Average

This piece has very good content, but I got a little lost and confused how it explained so fast, and each sentence was a bit choppy... But well done!

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013

Thanks Claire,
but where is
the question,
for I life not
of this Earth!
Ricky.