Searching for forgotten moments
Some things are just broken17 total reviews
Comment from mauial
Funny how finding someone you thought you needed to fill a void instead didn't. Sad to say, but some people just should never have been a parent in the first place. The irony of this is powerful.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013
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Funny how finding someone you thought you needed to fill a void instead didn't. Sad to say, but some people just should never have been a parent in the first place. The irony of this is powerful.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013
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thank you.
Comment from madhatter1977
A wonderful Lune poem, heartwrenching in the search for a mother who is found but cannot provide love. The syllable count is spot on and the subject is very powerful - I think you will do well in this contest.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013
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A wonderful Lune poem, heartwrenching in the search for a mother who is found but cannot provide love. The syllable count is spot on and the subject is very powerful - I think you will do well in this contest.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013
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thank you
Comment from fluffnstuff
WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN///////i'm so happy to see that poem....u have no idea. been going through alot? ME TOO talk at you later. nice write. fluff
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN///////i'm so happy to see that poem....u have no idea. been going through alot? ME TOO talk at you later. nice write. fluff
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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I'm back can't explain but I've been let out of exile so to speak.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a thought-provoking poem. The author creates a very readable piece for the reader in this story. It is well laid out and formatted. This reads well and grabs the attention.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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This is a thought-provoking poem. The author creates a very readable piece for the reader in this story. It is well laid out and formatted. This reads well and grabs the attention.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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thank you for the kind review.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Ridley Williams
Sometimes reality just flat out sucks! Your story breaks my heart. The reader wonders what the mother's situation was that caused her to have to give you up. It probably was not out of hate, but more out of knowing she was in way over her head. It's sad when people conceive children they can't keep. In spite of that set back in life, I hope you are dealing with those demons from the past. All my very best, Ridley
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Sometimes reality just flat out sucks! Your story breaks my heart. The reader wonders what the mother's situation was that caused her to have to give you up. It probably was not out of hate, but more out of knowing she was in way over her head. It's sad when people conceive children they can't keep. In spite of that set back in life, I hope you are dealing with those demons from the past. All my very best, Ridley
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank you. I have a few stories about what happened in my profile if you want to sort threw it. Lol thanks again
Comment from Pili Pubul
Thank you for your author notes, it makes this Lune so powerfully meaningful, I was a war refuge , my mother was a widow with four children, she did not abandoned me, but I was at three in an orphanage, and ten years in a convent of retired nuns , i was the only child living there, with day school, I did see other children, she visited when she could, but lived 12 hours away. So I relate to some degree. But completely understand. Big hug. Good luck in the contest. Pili
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your author notes, it makes this Lune so powerfully meaningful, I was a war refuge , my mother was a widow with four children, she did not abandoned me, but I was at three in an orphanage, and ten years in a convent of retired nuns , i was the only child living there, with day school, I did see other children, she visited when she could, but lived 12 hours away. So I relate to some degree. But completely understand. Big hug. Good luck in the contest. Pili
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thanks wow that's an interesting story ill have to look up your stories in your profile.
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You are most welcome. Pili
Comment from Black_Oxygen
With very few words, this poetry tugs at the heart. The
emotions are powerful and the sentiments are sincere.
The attached photo is a nice accent that enhances the
message. Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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With very few words, this poetry tugs at the heart. The
emotions are powerful and the sentiments are sincere.
The attached photo is a nice accent that enhances the
message. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Your welcome thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Janelle
Such a difficult poem to write, in more ways than one. Even more difficult to have lived it, I imagine. Your pain is palpable in this excellent Lune poem, a worthy entry for the contest. My sister-in-law Christine was given up at birth. She found her mother fifty years later and was again rejected. When the mother was told of Christines' death five years later, she cried. I don't understand that.
Good luck in the comp. Regards, Jan
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Such a difficult poem to write, in more ways than one. Even more difficult to have lived it, I imagine. Your pain is palpable in this excellent Lune poem, a worthy entry for the contest. My sister-in-law Christine was given up at birth. She found her mother fifty years later and was again rejected. When the mother was told of Christines' death five years later, she cried. I don't understand that.
Good luck in the comp. Regards, Jan
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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What we feel on the inside is often different then reality. She was crying for what she felt real or imagined. Sometimes when we we don't have what we need we imagine it and the imagination can be more powerful then reality.
Comment from Stephen Wolff
Such a search is always a perilous undertaking and often ends in disappointment. I was adopted and my natural mother found me a few years ago. In my case it has worked well. Your poem is very affecting and expresses well your feelings when experiencing what very few people have to face.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Such a search is always a perilous undertaking and often ends in disappointment. I was adopted and my natural mother found me a few years ago. In my case it has worked well. Your poem is very affecting and expresses well your feelings when experiencing what very few people have to face.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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thanks and Im glad things worked out for you.
Comment from lakeport
Searching for forgotten moments, indeed that's a lovely expressed poem, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. lakeport....
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Searching for forgotten moments, indeed that's a lovely expressed poem, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. lakeport....
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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thanks again
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your welcome.lakeport.
