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"The Gift of Life."

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True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world

3 total reviews 
Comment from donkeyoatey
Exceptional
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Can any of us understand the "big picture" of life we are thrust into? Can anyone really understand our pain as well as we do? Is there really a reason for what happens, or is it all random? These questions have plagued mankind for centuries..we have no answers, only faith..keep yours my friend. What an ambitious undertaking..I wish you all the best, I have faith you can do it! Donkeyoatey

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
    I'm slowly learning as I tighten my Poet skills from Christ! I owe you for the stars!
    Dinner at Tiffany's?
    Richard.
reply by donkeyoatey on 15-Aug-2013
    Sounds like a plan! LOL! Donkeyoatey
Comment from tbacha58
Excellent
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I would give him my life instead of me , as a mother. Oh my God. The suffering is non stoppable, your eyes will see him if you are deeply sleeping, the knowing that you donated his whole body to give life, I cried my eyes out, reaching for you through this writing. I wish i was near to hold you till you empty all your tears. Sad my Gd, so sad, a beautiful poem writ. God Bless you and your family. May he rest in peace. Terry

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
    To create is a blessed privileged as do not...
    To create life three times
    and raise two others daughters is a test...
    To create and raise is a passage of Human
    Ability, gifted?
    You tell me after this.
    To lose your only son, your treasure whom
    never caused you ONE PROBLEM, no matter
    what the circumstances is the real gift
    in today's hard and sometimes difficult
    World Terry.
    Bless you now as a Mormon Priest who come from
    Nj. NY, and Pennsylvania to listen, absorb, and
    PONDER...
    Richard.
    {Ricky1024
    Rated and ranked by two "Who's Who.
    As # 1 writer on this sordid of planet Earth.
Comment from Ekim777
Excellent
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The excruciating mourning must come to an end. Something easily dies in us; our possession of something else. To live again is harder still. Not just to exist with memories. After all life is our first reality, maybe all we have. I say this as one who has borne loss too. -Ekim777

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
    Read the ignora ntreview and help me either by reporting this writer or give that idiot a worderfully negative review!!! Thanks Ekim777 and I owe you 7 seven star reviews! Richard. {Ricky1024.}
reply by Ekim777 on 10-Aug-2013
    RICKY; We are dealing with sensitive issues here. I can only speak for myself. I can't speak for anyone else. Take care. -EKIM777
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
    I'll put a block on him or her.
    Thanks, Ricky.