thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Timing"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
5 total reviews
Comment from wierdgrace
wow, this is natural, and so many women I bet, can relate to these words, I laughed, and yet felt the feelings and love in your passionate words, good luck in the contest.
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wow, this is natural, and so many women I bet, can relate to these words, I laughed, and yet felt the feelings and love in your passionate words, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review and kind words.I still feel the same way after all these years
Comment from Insane Membrane
lucky you .. to have that passion years later thats something to treasure
your poem fits the brief for this competition well done and good luck
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lucky you .. to have that passion years later thats something to treasure
your poem fits the brief for this competition well done and good luck
Comment Written 09-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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thank you I know how bless I am to have a wonderful husband
Comment from RYME4U
Nicely written, I like the build up of descriptions to the end of the poem. These words show love and passion and your rhymes and rhythm are good.
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Nicely written, I like the build up of descriptions to the end of the poem. These words show love and passion and your rhymes and rhythm are good.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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thank you for your review and words of encouragement.
Comment from Kingsland
This poem is very lyrical and reads very smoothly. It has good emotions at its core of thoughts. This was a well written piece of poetic art that I enjoyed partaking of... John
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This poem is very lyrical and reads very smoothly. It has good emotions at its core of thoughts. This was a well written piece of poetic art that I enjoyed partaking of... John
Comment Written 09-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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thank you for your review
Comment from adewpearl
good alliteration in makes my world melt
Good depiction of this scene where your amorous husband wins out over your business call with the boss
I would have liked to see the passion ramped up just a little more, but overall, a good entry in this contest :-) Brooke
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good alliteration in makes my world melt
Good depiction of this scene where your amorous husband wins out over your business call with the boss
I would have liked to see the passion ramped up just a little more, but overall, a good entry in this contest :-) Brooke
Comment Written 09-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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thank you for your review I still feel that some things are still private even in a world where every one wants to tell everything