Grocery Store
My first contest poem3 total reviews
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece meets the criteria of the 5-7-5. The syllable count is correct as this piece is short, sweet and the point. I wish you the best in the contest as I welcome you to this site. Much love from the Riter.
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This piece meets the criteria of the 5-7-5. The syllable count is correct as this piece is short, sweet and the point. I wish you the best in the contest as I welcome you to this site. Much love from the Riter.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2013
Comment from Kidlike101
correct 5/7/5 syllable count by this reader.
a very cute poem. you might want to consider enhancing it with the use of art work.
Best of luck in the contest!
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correct 5/7/5 syllable count by this reader.
a very cute poem. you might want to consider enhancing it with the use of art work.
Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2013
Comment from humpwhistle
This is a good contest entry. I like the triple
rhyme, and and the sense of urgency contained in
the last line. Also I like the topic in general.
I get tired of rainbows and butterflys.
Good luck with the voters.
Peace, Lee
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This is a good contest entry. I like the triple
rhyme, and and the sense of urgency contained in
the last line. Also I like the topic in general.
I get tired of rainbows and butterflys.
Good luck with the voters.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 04-Aug-2013
