Comment from zeldasmith

Excellent

This is almost an erotic poem...very, very romantic and descriptive....an easy read and any poem with a rose is good to me...love roses....nicely laid out..good job my friend.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013

I had convinced myself that it was a by poem.

reply by zeldasmith on 06-Aug-2013

I'm sorry if I sound dumb...but what is a by poem?

Comment from gaangel62

Excellent

Such a beautiful love poem, so much expressed in this poem. It flowed very well. Thanks for sharing this great poem.... I love the line

I am yours
Take my hand
Our love will be forever

Angie

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013

Thanks for the kind revue. I hope he ends up with the girl.

reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013

Thanks for the kind revue. I hope he ends up with the girl.

Comment from jadapenn

Excellent

Hi, I enjoyed this poem. It flowed well an speaks of all the joys of love. So sweet and tender. You chose a rose to round your work off and this is very fitting. Well written. luv jada

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013

Thanks for the kind revue. I hope he ends up with the girl.

Norm

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This is sweet; I guess it will impress the intended recipient. I think the line "To its touch" would sound better as "At its touch" and I guess that's about it.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013

I changed it to read "To your touch".

Thanks,

Norm