The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Moving On To New Horizons"Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!
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Comment from 22allgood
Another great short chapter. That must have been frightening for you. I know how I feel when I get lost. It's great that God was looking after you. Good story. I like the additions to this chapter. Ginger beer in the boot, oh dear, that would have been hard to clean up. Pig shooting would have been interesting for a young man.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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Another great short chapter. That must have been frightening for you. I know how I feel when I get lost. It's great that God was looking after you. Good story. I like the additions to this chapter. Ginger beer in the boot, oh dear, that would have been hard to clean up. Pig shooting would have been interesting for a young man.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2013
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He sure was Sis. He has looked after me right through my life. Gave me the love of my life too. Appreciate your reviews. Hope you are enjoying the ride.
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yep, sure am. You have done a good job of writing.
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Chapter 9 has had a rename and additions will be moving it a bit later over next to the other Early Trips.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, sanky, you did an excellent job writing this tale of the misadventures you had because of missing the turnoff "sign". i was in cocoa beach one day and wanted to find a baptist church to go to. i ended up getting lost and was in tears. i went 34 miles on nothing but cow pasture road and ended up in a place called st. cloud. i ate lunch after church and drove back to my hotel room. the next day i went to universal studios and on the way out of the parking lot i got cut off and ended up on the orange blossom trail. nobody could tell me how to get back to the beeline expressway. i kept driving and i found a little town i was familiar with from the day before--St. Cloud. God used my getting lost to prepare me for the next night when I really needed to find a way back.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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this is very well written, sanky, you did an excellent job writing this tale of the misadventures you had because of missing the turnoff "sign". i was in cocoa beach one day and wanted to find a baptist church to go to. i ended up getting lost and was in tears. i went 34 miles on nothing but cow pasture road and ended up in a place called st. cloud. i ate lunch after church and drove back to my hotel room. the next day i went to universal studios and on the way out of the parking lot i got cut off and ended up on the orange blossom trail. nobody could tell me how to get back to the beeline expressway. i kept driving and i found a little town i was familiar with from the day before--St. Cloud. God used my getting lost to prepare me for the next night when I really needed to find a way back.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Not the location of the Cider House Rules Movie?? With Michael Caine? Thanks for the review
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Chapter 9 has had a rename and additions will be moving it a bit later over next to the other Early Trips.
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Just to let you know this story was incorporated into Chapter 7 after some re-arranging in case you want to have a new look at it. Chapter 9 has taken a new course now.
Comment from barkingdog
You were lucky to be found an even better, the man had a winch cable. I wonder how you could have ever missed the fridge.
Glad you're safe and sound.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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You were lucky to be found an even better, the man had a winch cable. I wonder how you could have ever missed the fridge.
Glad you're safe and sound.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Hi, thanks for the review. I think I was getting tired and the colour (then) of that fridge (not as in the photo...actually probably a different one hehe) might have melded in the surroundings and I did not really know exactly was I was looking for.
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Chapter 9 has had a rename and additions will be moving it a bit later over next to the other Early Trips.
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Just to let you know this story was incorporated into Chapter 7 after some re-arranging in case you want to have a new look at it. Chapter 9 has taken a new course now.
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Hi friend had not seen you for some time. I want to clse this chapter as it isd now incorporated in the new reorganized book at Chapter 10 part 2. If you have time please come over and have a look been a while since we saw you.
Comment from Treischel
A strange story of a strange drive on a stranger road. Your got stuck in the muck and got pulled out by a Ranger Rover. How could you miss that refrigerator?
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013
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A strange story of a strange drive on a stranger road. Your got stuck in the muck and got pulled out by a Ranger Rover. How could you miss that refrigerator?
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013
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Love the poetry in the review thanks.
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Chapter 9 has had a rename and additions will be moving it a bit later over next to the other Early Trips.
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Just to let you know this story was incorporated into Chapter 7 after some re-arranging in case you want to have a new look at it. Chapter 9 has taken a new course now.
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Hi friend had not seen you for some time. I want to clse this chapter as it isd now incorporated in the new reorganized book at Chapter 10 part 2. If you have time please come over and have a look been a while since we saw you.
Comment from DanielEkine
Beautifully written. I would suggest adding a paragraph spacing between these two paragraphs.
" had been instructed that after leaving Walgett, the last main town - I would go about 10 klms west of the town, and then hit dirt road.
Back in those days there was no such thing as is present there, today, 40 years post story setting - as an "All Weather" Road especially out the back of 'beyond' from Walgett. "
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013
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Beautifully written. I would suggest adding a paragraph spacing between these two paragraphs.
" had been instructed that after leaving Walgett, the last main town - I would go about 10 klms west of the town, and then hit dirt road.
Back in those days there was no such thing as is present there, today, 40 years post story setting - as an "All Weather" Road especially out the back of 'beyond' from Walgett. "
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013
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Hi mate thanks again will do that as you suggested. Was worried about too many paragraphs this is gonna be in my book one day if I ever get it finished. Had a terrible time with the Fridge...when I capitalised it in one place it mad a whole new line grrr.
Thanks again.
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hey I did that edit you suggested look at it again.
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Chapter 9 has had a rename and additions will be moving it a bit later over next to the other Early Trips.
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Just to let you know this story was incorporated into Chapter 7 after some re-arranging in case you want to have a new look at it. Chapter 9 has taken a new course now.
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Hi friend had not seen you for some time. I want to clse this chapter as it isd now incorporated in the new reorganized book at Chapter 10 part 2. If you have time please come over and have a look been a while since we saw you.
Comment from kiwijenny
You would have been in trouble for sure...if someone hadn't come along...we have been rescued before . It sure is a Godthing....cool way to sign post .....with a fridge........well done I liked your story
God bless
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013
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You would have been in trouble for sure...if someone hadn't come along...we have been rescued before . It sure is a Godthing....cool way to sign post .....with a fridge........well done I liked your story
God bless
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013
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Hi again, think we seen each other before right? Appreciate your review. Hoping to see my Dads in Glory some day we believe he called out to God to save him weeks before he passed over. There is more to that story also.
Thanks again.
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Chapter 9 has had a rename and additions will be moving it a bit later over next to the other Early Trips.
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Just to let you know this story was incorporated into Chapter 7 after some re-arranging in case you want to have a new look at it. Chapter 9 has taken a new course now.
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Hi friend had not seen you for some time. I want to clse this chapter as it isd now incorporated in the new reorganized book at Chapter 10 part 2. If you have time please come over and have a look if you had not done so, recently.
Comment from Kylieflower
This was both funny, and well written.I'm glad it all turned out well for you in the end. This was fun to read, and very amusing. Good job!
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013
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This was both funny, and well written.I'm glad it all turned out well for you in the end. This was fun to read, and very amusing. Good job!
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2013
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Thanks Kylie appreciated your review. It is actually apart of my book if I ever get that finished.
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I hope I get a chance to read it when your done.
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Hi Kylie I hope I am here long enough to finish it hehe. I said to my Endocrinologist a while back it may not get finished until I am gone. His reply..."Get it finished then you will live longer!" A great friend sadly to retire later this year having my last appointment with him next week. You can read all about his part in *my life since 1984 in the book whenever it is published.
*Subject of the book Cheers.
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Chapter 9 has had a rename and additions will be moving it a bit later over next to the other Early Trips.
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Just to let you know this story was incorporated into Chapter 7 after some re-arranging in case you want to have a new look at it. Chapter 9 has taken a new course now.
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Hi friend had not seen you for some time. I want to clse this chapter as it isd now incorporated in the new reorganized book at Chapter 10 part 2. If you have time please come over and have a look, if you had not recently.
