The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Moving On To New Horizons"Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!
27 total reviews
Comment from gene roush
where's the song?
I enjoyed the read.
I spent a couple months working in a mental institution (before they were called hospitals), and did similar things.
This was an interesting post, thanks for sharing.
Gene
You did sorta' promise a song.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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where's the song?
I enjoyed the read.
I spent a couple months working in a mental institution (before they were called hospitals), and did similar things.
This was an interesting post, thanks for sharing.
Gene
You did sorta' promise a song.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Yes I did sorry. Something went wrong with that are you on PC or Appl Mac? I can send you a link to my old Web site (Windows media player) if interested. Write me on sankey48@yhoo.com.au can send you an MP3 of the music for the song. I did have it working on hgere but it needs repair sorry.Go to the following Link and Click on Number 5.
Comment from c_lucas
Some people are territorial when it comes to their jobs. This is very well written with very good explanations of the various jobs. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Some people are territorial when it comes to their jobs. This is very well written with very good explanations of the various jobs. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Thanks Bro hope things are improving for you. I miss all my favourite writers. Just discovered I had Sharing turned off on my chapter. have a look back there are still some with Rewards. Also just found out how to activate the Lucky leprechaun just about the Book banner thing. Tom does not really help with info.
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The Leprchaun-called a Little Dude by a friend-is very helpful in rewarding your reviewers.
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Yeah well Tom has never explained it all that well. Will use it some more now, as I have nearly run out of the banner thing.
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It is best to earn your banners because they last longer than the ones you can purchase.
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Right mate. It is getting harder these days as a lot of the best friends have left FS.
Comment from MelB
Assistant is the lowest of grades of clerk, or was at the time of writing.My new Clerical Assistant duties - writing.( ) My
Another interesting piece to your job history. I like that you started a hearing impaired group for the staff in two different locations.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Assistant is the lowest of grades of clerk, or was at the time of writing.My new Clerical Assistant duties - writing.( ) My
Another interesting piece to your job history. I like that you started a hearing impaired group for the staff in two different locations.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Was it a space needed after the period of that line? Will work on it thanks for coming along. We have started a big change with the is chapter.
Comment from Ben Colder
I bounced in long enough to read one of your post. I remember this previously sometimes last year I think. As always I enjoy reading your work. Thanks for sharing. My best to you.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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I bounced in long enough to read one of your post. I remember this previously sometimes last year I think. As always I enjoy reading your work. Thanks for sharing. My best to you.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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I probably edited it some since your last visi8t, thanks for coming by again.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I want to hear the song. LOL I but it's a dosey!! I enjoyed reading your post. I am sorry I missed it the first time around but am glad I get to read it right now.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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I want to hear the song. LOL I but it's a dosey!! I enjoyed reading your post. I am sorry I missed it the first time around but am glad I get to read it right now.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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Are you on PC or Apple/NMac Or Mobile/Cell? Can give you a link to it on my Web site Or even send you a MP3 version as an Attachment to E-mail. I think I have your e-mail right? Write to sankey48@yahoo.com.au if not. Thanks for coming by.
Comment from judiverse
Thirty-three doesn't sound old, but if you're working with mostly 20-somethings, I'm sure it would seem that way. You have the ability to get along in whatever situation you find yourself. A great attribute. Starting the hearing impaired group showed initiative on your part. I was intrigued by the story of the woman who claimed you invaded her space. You might have given more details, instead of making reference to the song. Great work. judi
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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Thirty-three doesn't sound old, but if you're working with mostly 20-somethings, I'm sure it would seem that way. You have the ability to get along in whatever situation you find yourself. A great attribute. Starting the hearing impaired group showed initiative on your part. I was intrigued by the story of the woman who claimed you invaded her space. You might have given more details, instead of making reference to the song. Great work. judi
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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Will go back and do some more work on that if you like. I can send you an MP3 attachment to e-mail for the song if you like. Can't remember if you have my e-mail are you on PC or Apple/ Mac or Cell?
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Well all it takes is one to start the process rolling. I am so amazed at the unique experiences you have had that helped you in your spiritual growth and the ability to help others
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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Well all it takes is one to start the process rolling. I am so amazed at the unique experiences you have had that helped you in your spiritual growth and the ability to help others
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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Thanks Barb. This is the start of a whole you era in my life.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter. There are always a variety of people in a big company that we have to work with. They are not always pleasant to work with but we have to be polite at all times.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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A very well-written chapter. There are always a variety of people in a big company that we have to work with. They are not always pleasant to work with but we have to be polite at all times.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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Thanks Sis this is the begg=inning of a whole new era in my life as you will find out real soon.
Comment from Mastery
Hi Geoff. It appears to be a credit in your cap for starting the group on the hearing impaired "Hive". Good going. The writing itself is fine...well thought out anc clear.
However, the first paragraph again, for instance, has many terms that I as an american do not understand. That's why I said you must make up your mind what your target audience is...and if it includes Americans remember we do not all understand everything here for instance. "In November 1984 I commenced in the Post Audit Area of the Out Patients' Department, at Concord Hospital, as a Clerical Assistant Grade 2.
And: "two grades above their gazetted positions."
Suggestion: Tell your age in each of these steps in your life. We have no idea how old you are when you became a clerk #2. Also, give us a feeling of the setting. The picturwes are fine but we cannot SEE what your work area looked like. What was your boss like. what did he or she look like etc.
You need more COLOR in your work
I hope this review is of some value to you, my friend. Blessings, Bob
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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Hi Geoff. It appears to be a credit in your cap for starting the group on the hearing impaired "Hive". Good going. The writing itself is fine...well thought out anc clear.
However, the first paragraph again, for instance, has many terms that I as an american do not understand. That's why I said you must make up your mind what your target audience is...and if it includes Americans remember we do not all understand everything here for instance. "In November 1984 I commenced in the Post Audit Area of the Out Patients' Department, at Concord Hospital, as a Clerical Assistant Grade 2.
And: "two grades above their gazetted positions."
Suggestion: Tell your age in each of these steps in your life. We have no idea how old you are when you became a clerk #2. Also, give us a feeling of the setting. The picturwes are fine but we cannot SEE what your work area looked like. What was your boss like. what did he or she look like etc.
You need more COLOR in your work
I hope this review is of some value to you, my friend. Blessings, Bob
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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Thanks Bob.More good ideas. Will work on it and let you know. I appreciate what you are saying about the fi=differences too. I got a bit of a serve from the Political chapter that I split off another one because of your encouragement. People like the shorter chapters as well. This one used to be bigger ages ago.
Comment from Sasha
I enjoyed this chapter. You are obviously a good worker and able to bring skills you learned at other jobs to this one. This chapter is shorter than previous ones. I think that is better and should bring you more readers. Many don't like the time it takes to read long posts, and pass over the long ones. Nice work with this one.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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I enjoyed this chapter. You are obviously a good worker and able to bring skills you learned at other jobs to this one. This chapter is shorter than previous ones. I think that is better and should bring you more readers. Many don't like the time it takes to read long posts, and pass over the long ones. Nice work with this one.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Yeah well this one ended up shorter as it was broken up off another. Interesting comments about the shorter chapter hehe. This is the beginning of the big change to take place in my life. Thanks for coming along on the ride.
