Thoughts Make A Billionaire?
Really? A Non-Fiction in 222 words.92 total reviews
Comment from MzNiki
I thought this was executed wonderfully! You kept my attention from start to finish! Great philosophies, well written my friend! So enjoyed this contribution......Keep up the groovy work!
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I thought this was executed wonderfully! You kept my attention from start to finish! Great philosophies, well written my friend! So enjoyed this contribution......Keep up the groovy work!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from chasennov
'Thoughts Make A Billionaire.' I have just read an excellent piece of work which you have created here. Not very often do I find work done on FS of this caliber. Well done.
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'Thoughts Make A Billionaire.' I have just read an excellent piece of work which you have created here. Not very often do I find work done on FS of this caliber. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from Treischel
Your writing is valuable in the concepts presented. First in the realization that things don't always go as planned, but also in the fact that we don't cognizance of all factor, especially God's. I like hearing the thoughts from a villagers perspective, which is foreign to me.
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Your writing is valuable in the concepts presented. First in the realization that things don't always go as planned, but also in the fact that we don't cognizance of all factor, especially God's. I like hearing the thoughts from a villagers perspective, which is foreign to me.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from MelReyn
I thought this piece shows improvement over your other pieces. It seems like you weren't trying so hard to impress and just allowed your message to stand on its own. It still has a strange flow, but it seems more streamlined, which is good. There is still room for improvement, but I'm proud of your hard work. ;)
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I thought this piece shows improvement over your other pieces. It seems like you weren't trying so hard to impress and just allowed your message to stand on its own. It still has a strange flow, but it seems more streamlined, which is good. There is still room for improvement, but I'm proud of your hard work. ;)
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from Cookie333
I thought my hubby was rich, boy was I fooled- or was I? We have what we need and still have each other- some days I feel rich and I must say I feel for those who claim they envy us... There is good and bad in all, I think it's about perception
Thank you
K
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I thought my hubby was rich, boy was I fooled- or was I? We have what we need and still have each other- some days I feel rich and I must say I feel for those who claim they envy us... There is good and bad in all, I think it's about perception
Thank you
K
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from SteveY
Nice job done on this one. An interesting message. I'm not totally sure I agree with it but still you've put together a very thought provoking piece.
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Nice job done on this one. An interesting message. I'm not totally sure I agree with it but still you've put together a very thought provoking piece.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from GaryCecil
I had a good time with this writing. It was interesting and I like what you had to say.
we know the future is invisible-unforeseeable, indefinite and inevitably changeable, I mean, we cannot predict or forecast the future, only we may think, still we make mistake, just we calculate, we love to believe in our own mathematics, while we can't see the future....
Very intriguing ^^
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I had a good time with this writing. It was interesting and I like what you had to say.
we know the future is invisible-unforeseeable, indefinite and inevitably changeable, I mean, we cannot predict or forecast the future, only we may think, still we make mistake, just we calculate, we love to believe in our own mathematics, while we can't see the future....
Very intriguing ^^
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from ReaThomas
I have clicked on some of your work before. You can really write, of that I have no doubt, but my brain hurts after reading this! I had to think way too much about it. Still, I am rating you five because you are a good writer and your grammar, etc. cannot be faulted.
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I have clicked on some of your work before. You can really write, of that I have no doubt, but my brain hurts after reading this! I had to think way too much about it. Still, I am rating you five because you are a good writer and your grammar, etc. cannot be faulted.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from Raver
Food for thought. Well written, different. It captures the way we think and the things we do not consider. However, I do think that what you think can help to shape you.
Good post.
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Food for thought. Well written, different. It captures the way we think and the things we do not consider. However, I do think that what you think can help to shape you.
Good post.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from William Walz
How did you know how desperately I was hoping for a fertilizer shop as a wedding gift? Rambling and incoherent, your message gets lost in your stream of consciousness approach. I wish I had something more positive to say, but I just can't get a handle on the helter-skelter style you use. Sorry.
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How did you know how desperately I was hoping for a fertilizer shop as a wedding gift? Rambling and incoherent, your message gets lost in your stream of consciousness approach. I wish I had something more positive to say, but I just can't get a handle on the helter-skelter style you use. Sorry.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
