Thoughts Make A Billionaire?
Really? A Non-Fiction in 222 words.92 total reviews
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
One rambling sentence after the other punctuated by a stream of commas. Resembles a tirade on existentialism that knows no bounds. As to catching one's attention, the author succeeds brilliantly without apparent concern for the reader's sanity. All I can say is, rewrite the piece into small bits that the reader can grasp and not choke on.
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One rambling sentence after the other punctuated by a stream of commas. Resembles a tirade on existentialism that knows no bounds. As to catching one's attention, the author succeeds brilliantly without apparent concern for the reader's sanity. All I can say is, rewrite the piece into small bits that the reader can grasp and not choke on.
Regards:
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from wierdgrace
I try not to read self improvements, as I figure there is no hope for me, but I did stop and read yours, again, I love you fiction non fiction choices, or are they, well written monologue. thank you for sharing.
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I try not to read self improvements, as I figure there is no hope for me, but I did stop and read yours, again, I love you fiction non fiction choices, or are they, well written monologue. thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from Zue65
This piece tells a mouthful, just like your previous pieces, it is getting better everytime you post a new one. I agree with you, sometimes we put so much hope in things and in our dreams, but we know it doesn't work that way, just like magic. We even wish to win a lottery, but luck comes only to chosen few, and it is influenced as you say by time, by systems, by laws, customs, conventions and most of all God, it is about the power of prayer and sheer hard work too. God bless.
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This piece tells a mouthful, just like your previous pieces, it is getting better everytime you post a new one. I agree with you, sometimes we put so much hope in things and in our dreams, but we know it doesn't work that way, just like magic. We even wish to win a lottery, but luck comes only to chosen few, and it is influenced as you say by time, by systems, by laws, customs, conventions and most of all God, it is about the power of prayer and sheer hard work too. God bless.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from Apryle Willis
I particularly love what this piece brought to the table today. We can feel and think things with our minds and hearts all we wish. Its ok to have dreams and dare to dream big. The REALITY however is that even when we plan for the future taking right and smart steps, we cannot PLAN for the future. We can none of us know what tomorrow holds from day to day. Its always interesting for me to look back and see what I had planned and how it unfolded into what became the reality and truth. Love this. Apryle
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I particularly love what this piece brought to the table today. We can feel and think things with our minds and hearts all we wish. Its ok to have dreams and dare to dream big. The REALITY however is that even when we plan for the future taking right and smart steps, we cannot PLAN for the future. We can none of us know what tomorrow holds from day to day. Its always interesting for me to look back and see what I had planned and how it unfolded into what became the reality and truth. Love this. Apryle
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, alcreator, if thoughts could make me thousands or millions, i wouldn't have to work now, but my thoughts haven't come true so i pudge away working, lol. i'm glad to have a job
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this is very well written, alcreator, if thoughts could make me thousands or millions, i wouldn't have to work now, but my thoughts haven't come true so i pudge away working, lol. i'm glad to have a job
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from jmdg1954
But will everything happen as you think, dear; I know nothing happens as we think, wish or expect; we never take cognizance of the environment, time, people, peoples' thoughts, systems, society, laws, customs, conventions, and above all God, often many of us forget our limited ability, power or deservedness and that change is permanent...
The best of the piece. John
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But will everything happen as you think, dear; I know nothing happens as we think, wish or expect; we never take cognizance of the environment, time, people, peoples' thoughts, systems, society, laws, customs, conventions, and above all God, often many of us forget our limited ability, power or deservedness and that change is permanent...
The best of the piece. John
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from emjaihammond
Have you ever heard the saying "If you want to hear God laugh, just tell Him your plans?" That is what this makes me think about. I enjoyed reading it and thinking about when my children were little and we talked about what they wanted to be when they grew up. They were always dreamers and could have made anything happen within
God's allowance. Thank you for your creation.
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Have you ever heard the saying "If you want to hear God laugh, just tell Him your plans?" That is what this makes me think about. I enjoyed reading it and thinking about when my children were little and we talked about what they wanted to be when they grew up. They were always dreamers and could have made anything happen within
God's allowance. Thank you for your creation.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from BeckyW
I enjoyed reading this catchy little piece of yours. It has some truth and a little cocky humor as in the personality of the human character; which certainly deserves some descriptive notations such as what you've shared here. Very clever and entertaining:)
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I enjoyed reading this catchy little piece of yours. It has some truth and a little cocky humor as in the personality of the human character; which certainly deserves some descriptive notations such as what you've shared here. Very clever and entertaining:)
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from Darkhorse555
none of us can predict the future god has it already mapped for us thinking of marriage for happiness sake money don't buy love I enjoyed your piece
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none of us can predict the future god has it already mapped for us thinking of marriage for happiness sake money don't buy love I enjoyed your piece
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
Comment from elchupakabra
I always enjoy reading your prose, it is always so elegantly well put. I love your patient and understated tone, and while we differ on opinions, I can still enjoy your stories and the way you express yourself. Great work again as always. Namaste.
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I always enjoy reading your prose, it is always so elegantly well put. I love your patient and understated tone, and while we differ on opinions, I can still enjoy your stories and the way you express yourself. Great work again as always. Namaste.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2013
