Apples
apples are healthy2 total reviews
Comment from lindalcreel
A good poem, but I think you may have misspelled crunchy, unless that was on purpose. Good luck in the contest. I haven't had the courage to enter one yet myself. God Bless and keep writing.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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A good poem, but I think you may have misspelled crunchy, unless that was on purpose. Good luck in the contest. I haven't had the courage to enter one yet myself. God Bless and keep writing.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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thank you for telling me that
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You're welcome.
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can i make a new story
Comment from JennyB32
I like the words that you chose to describe apples. However, this is not in 5-7-5 format. I checked using a syllable counter online just to make sure and I have it as 5-7-7. Also, "chrunchy" should be "crunchy". The other thing that I noticed is that you did not use any spaces between your words and punctuation.
Again, I do like the descriptive words that you used. Good luck in the contest.
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I like the words that you chose to describe apples. However, this is not in 5-7-5 format. I checked using a syllable counter online just to make sure and I have it as 5-7-7. Also, "chrunchy" should be "crunchy". The other thing that I noticed is that you did not use any spaces between your words and punctuation.
Again, I do like the descriptive words that you used. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
