I Don't Know Why
A Non-Fiction in about 800 words.Why it happens.............88 total reviews
Comment from jmdg1954
Looks like you have most imaginable dreams posted in your hourly, daily, weekly, monthly, annual endeavors. Did I miss the one wanting to be President? Or was that intentionally omitted?
Nice post. I'm sure buried in there are some truths...
John
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Looks like you have most imaginable dreams posted in your hourly, daily, weekly, monthly, annual endeavors. Did I miss the one wanting to be President? Or was that intentionally omitted?
Nice post. I'm sure buried in there are some truths...
John
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
Comment from Kidlike101
Interesting post.
I think most of us started of with big dreams, nobody wants to end up in a boring corner office.
I loved the fanstory opening, do you really do that per day? I barely do half of that on the site per week!
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Interesting post.
I think most of us started of with big dreams, nobody wants to end up in a boring corner office.
I loved the fanstory opening, do you really do that per day? I barely do half of that on the site per week!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
Comment from Norbanus
'If wishes were fishes' or so it is said
I'd fulfill my hopes and my dreams.
but when I look out o'er that vast sea of dread
my inner bum shrivels and screams.
I'd rather not think on that massive place
With all of that expansive room
A dozen wives that I have to face
such notions fill me with gloom.
Thanks for the light shined on such heavy work,
But I'd rather sit here and just be a jerk.
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'If wishes were fishes' or so it is said
I'd fulfill my hopes and my dreams.
but when I look out o'er that vast sea of dread
my inner bum shrivels and screams.
I'd rather not think on that massive place
With all of that expansive room
A dozen wives that I have to face
such notions fill me with gloom.
Thanks for the light shined on such heavy work,
But I'd rather sit here and just be a jerk.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
Comment from S A Bullen
Funny man! You sound like the typical gunna. Good Aussie gunna be - always optimistic, but rarely realistic. That was a good piece, I enjoyed that very much. I don't feel I qualify to judge one's writing since I'm not a teacher, but can only tell you how pieces make me feel. For me writing is a very individual thing and people will see different things. Just to let you know that was very good. Sheryn.
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Funny man! You sound like the typical gunna. Good Aussie gunna be - always optimistic, but rarely realistic. That was a good piece, I enjoyed that very much. I don't feel I qualify to judge one's writing since I'm not a teacher, but can only tell you how pieces make me feel. For me writing is a very individual thing and people will see different things. Just to let you know that was very good. Sheryn.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a very interesting post. I think that most people think that they are going to do something great with their lives, or at least they would like to. We all have the capacity for greatness, but only a few actually realize their goals.
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This is a very interesting post. I think that most people think that they are going to do something great with their lives, or at least they would like to. We all have the capacity for greatness, but only a few actually realize their goals.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
Comment from JB Lynn
I enjoyed reading this. I felt like I got to ride along inside your narrator's head while they day dreamed through a week. Just about everyone should be able to relate to this piece, because I think we all have our dreams.
Thank you for sharing.
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I enjoyed reading this. I felt like I got to ride along inside your narrator's head while they day dreamed through a week. Just about everyone should be able to relate to this piece, because I think we all have our dreams.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Good flow, it kept me interested until the end. You seem to have a firm grasp on the story line and you write with confidence. I look forward to reading your other stuff.
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Good flow, it kept me interested until the end. You seem to have a firm grasp on the story line and you write with confidence. I look forward to reading your other stuff.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
Comment from Dustybones
But I cannot. I never know why and who dismantles everything. Why always something else happens to me?
For starters my friend I think the reason may be trying to think about all those unrealistic goals instead of getting to work on one feasible one. No one can be all things to all the fans here. Cya!
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But I cannot. I never know why and who dismantles everything. Why always something else happens to me?
For starters my friend I think the reason may be trying to think about all those unrealistic goals instead of getting to work on one feasible one. No one can be all things to all the fans here. Cya!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from Rmocruz
I wish I could truly understand what I just read.
I have an interpretation to offer.
It appears to me somewhere between a greedy Christmas gift list and a politicians deal with the devil, masterfully
exonerated by the last line and its relationship to the
title.
A very interesting novel approach.
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I wish I could truly understand what I just read.
I have an interpretation to offer.
It appears to me somewhere between a greedy Christmas gift list and a politicians deal with the devil, masterfully
exonerated by the last line and its relationship to the
title.
A very interesting novel approach.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Fiction! The reader feels this write is exaggerated but brings out a clear point. Many go on about
their goals and objectives and for the reader it showed how ridiculous it sounds! The author did a great job conveying
what cannot be done! Thank you, harmony13
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Excellent Fiction! The reader feels this write is exaggerated but brings out a clear point. Many go on about
their goals and objectives and for the reader it showed how ridiculous it sounds! The author did a great job conveying
what cannot be done! Thank you, harmony13
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
