Suspicion
A young teenage boy dies because of...7 total reviews
Comment from RodG
If you had not given us your author's notes, I would not have known the backstory or your intent. A list of words does not narrate the tale for us. I truly hope you find a way to tell your poignant tale another way, perhaps through free verse.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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If you had not given us your author's notes, I would not have known the backstory or your intent. A list of words does not narrate the tale for us. I truly hope you find a way to tell your poignant tale another way, perhaps through free verse.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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First off this poem is an Acrostic one. You must look
deep into each word for meaning. It does tell a story
about over reacting without all the facts. Try again
and you will see what I mean. If you don't like a poet's
poem don't give an average rate, but pass it by, if not
understood. Thanks, RodG
Comment from SteveY
Your author notes were a clearer description to me than the poem was. But still it has its own beauty. Just a little hard for me to follow or at first understand.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Your author notes were a clearer description to me than the poem was. But still it has its own beauty. Just a little hard for me to follow or at first understand.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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That's is true but when you meditate on each word, along
with the description, it becomes very clear. We all can
have a moment when suspicion may come forward. Getting
all the facts helps, not to do something that we later
regret in this case. Humble thanks, SteveY
Comment from Saucey
I love this piece very much and the message, the presentation is awesome, I appreciate your Author Notes, The words selected direct and appropriate no need to say much on this topic, this piece is worth every star, thanks for sharing:)
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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I love this piece very much and the message, the presentation is awesome, I appreciate your Author Notes, The words selected direct and appropriate no need to say much on this topic, this piece is worth every star, thanks for sharing:)
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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My heartfelt thanks, Saucey.
Comment from Adi
I loved your poem very very much. You wrote the poem in only ten words that`s why I gave it five stars. Any way good luck on your poem.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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I loved your poem very very much. You wrote the poem in only ten words that`s why I gave it five stars. Any way good luck on your poem.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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I am so glad you liked it, Adi. Thank You.
Comment from dmt1967
People judge to readily I always say people who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones and only god should judge good poem thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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People judge to readily I always say people who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones and only god should judge good poem thank you for sharing
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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I do agree that the final judge, God will set matters
straight, someday, dmt1967. Thanks.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Lynar,
You have used words with strong descriptive images to make you point within this work. Nice artwork to accompany your thoughts. Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Hi Lynar,
You have used words with strong descriptive images to make you point within this work. Nice artwork to accompany your thoughts. Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Thanks, Maureen. It's most appreciated.
Comment from elchupakabra
This is a good acrostic poem, the words you chose readily embody the original word, Suspicion. I quite like the application of colors along with your illustration to highlight your poem. This is a job well done.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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This is a good acrostic poem, the words you chose readily embody the original word, Suspicion. I quite like the application of colors along with your illustration to highlight your poem. This is a job well done.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Humble Thanks, elchupakabra