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Thoughts from the dark side

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Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
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I combined several of your poems to read tonight as I am very far behind in my reviews. I like this ghost story. Alive with dimension, I exist in a darkened form abandoned by time. Nicely done, you ought to pull this one out around a campfire some night...ooooooooooooooo.. :-0 Carolyn

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
    It is a ghost story. Nice job.
Comment from rhonny
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I really like this cleverly written poem, even though I don't fully understand it. I'm not sure if you mean 'dimension' or 'dementia' because it works either way I think. I love 'tic turns to toc like a drip to a drop'...:O)

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
    It is dimensions and it is a ghost poem.

    Norm
reply by rhonny on 23-Jul-2013
    :O)
reply by rhonny on 23-Jul-2013
    :O)
Comment from barkingdog
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This is so sad--hat someone should die feeling so embittered. It sounds like they are alone and forgotten. You have captured that emotion well.

Nice alliterations and onomatopoeia:
-tic turns to tock
-drip to a drop

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
    You have figure out the poem quite well. It is a ghoststory.

    Norm