I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 150 "Time Traveler"Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from elchupakabra
Excellent work, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. I like the way you chose to break your stanzas, the way it reads in my head is very smooth and easy. The imagery is stark and vivid, and I was quite surprised by the poem because the title had left me expecting something else. Very well done.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Excellent work, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. I like the way you chose to break your stanzas, the way it reads in my head is very smooth and easy. The imagery is stark and vivid, and I was quite surprised by the poem because the title had left me expecting something else. Very well done.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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I am thankful for the kind review. You are appreciated.
Norm
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I like this, maybe because I was watching two TV shows which had a lot of snow last night in Alaska and elsewhere. I think it is a strong concept to say the speaker has become winter itself.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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I like this, maybe because I was watching two TV shows which had a lot of snow last night in Alaska and elsewhere. I think it is a strong concept to say the speaker has become winter itself.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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I am thankful for the kind review. You are appreciated.
Norm
Comment from SteveY
Boy I sure this we all have felt like this from time to time. The good news is that winter thaws and spring is born. Excellent writing.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Boy I sure this we all have felt like this from time to time. The good news is that winter thaws and spring is born. Excellent writing.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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I am thankful for the kind review. You are appreciated.
Norm
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
You draw me into your emotions with such passion. This poem is 'unmatched' in it's visual of the 'downhearted' person. And then, I know the secret, Norm takes the frozen in eternity as a cocoon and becomes a literary butterfly.
:-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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You draw me into your emotions with such passion. This poem is 'unmatched' in it's visual of the 'downhearted' person. And then, I know the secret, Norm takes the frozen in eternity as a cocoon and becomes a literary butterfly.
:-) Carolyn
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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I am still riding a high from your last review,