I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "A Lesson In Psychiatric Care"Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from elchupakabra
First, there is a box specifically for the title of your poem, which you filled out, so there's no need to write it twice. Unless it was meant to be part of the poem, but it doesn't read that way, at least not to me. However, I genuinely like the poem itself. I enjoyed the unique rhyme scheme, the imagery and the choice in metaphors. Good work.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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First, there is a box specifically for the title of your poem, which you filled out, so there's no need to write it twice. Unless it was meant to be part of the poem, but it doesn't read that way, at least not to me. However, I genuinely like the poem itself. I enjoyed the unique rhyme scheme, the imagery and the choice in metaphors. Good work.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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It is the title of the poem and it has meaning.
Norm
Comment from SteveY
I like it a lot. I especially like the last stanza where even the criticism is answered with care, by those who are caring. Since I work in a psych hospital I can relate.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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I like it a lot. I especially like the last stanza where even the criticism is answered with care, by those who are caring. Since I work in a psych hospital I can relate.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the nice review, especially if it came from someone who knows the field.
Norm
