Comment from The Death

Excellent

Hello
I liked the write very much and as i started breading,it was all fluid.
"And it is God that loves us "
'that' or 'who'?

"A breadth of purity

Inhale them all"
Is it supposed to be 'breadth' or 'breathe'.
It can be 'breeze' too.

i liked these lines a lot
I am you
And you are me
Together we rise
Apart we fall

You did a good job:).

Regards
Shar-A

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013

I owe you. It is breathe. It is a typo.

Norm

Comment from DanielEkine

Excellent

Beautiful artwork.
Nice style of writing
SPAG is really good.
I like the ending of Inspiration
"Inhale them all"

Best part for me.
"A single concept
Let freedom ring
An inspiration for humanity
All men are created equal
A single act
Love thy brother as you would love thyself
A God for all
Bless his name that He makes us holy"

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013

Thanks for the kind review. It is certainly appreciated

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

I like the way you have collected together the three inspirational quotes in the first stanza and then amplified them in the rest of your poem to create your own inspirational piece.

Can't argue with anything you've written here.

Steve

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013

Thanks for the nice review. It is greatly appreciated

Norm