I Choose Rainbows
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Comment from JB Lynn
Although this is a sad topic, you've got some great imagery in this poem. I like the comparison between their eyes and twinkling, shining eyes. Vultures is an excellent metaphor for betraying friends.
I think it was a smart choice to put "But they went into darkness" on its own line, since it seperates the poem like friends will seperate when one betrays another.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Although this is a sad topic, you've got some great imagery in this poem. I like the comparison between their eyes and twinkling, shining eyes. Vultures is an excellent metaphor for betraying friends.
I think it was a smart choice to put "But they went into darkness" on its own line, since it seperates the poem like friends will seperate when one betrays another.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the kind review. It is appreciated.
Norm
Comment from barkingdog
People change and there is nothing worse than betrayal by close friend and/or family.It cuts to the core of our being, and something in us dies forever.
Well written and the emotions is all there.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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People change and there is nothing worse than betrayal by close friend and/or family.It cuts to the core of our being, and something in us dies forever.
Well written and the emotions is all there.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the kind review. It is appreciated.
Norm