Comment from zeldasmith

Excellent

A good poem written of depression. Nicely written and meaningful to thoses who've been there done that. The picture is ugly but apt for your poem. Well done my friend.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013

You are my favorite critic.

Norm

reply by zeldasmith on 17-Jul-2013

Really...aw!

Comment from mkflood

Excellent

this would be a cool poem for True Blood. i just wanted to personally thank u for sellecting my "true blood pt 1" and i am honored t be included with ur work. overall good job on the poem..mkflood

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013

I loved your picture. I thoughtit was perfect for the poem.

Norm

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Ah-h-h, music to my ears, these dark and sinister works. And a vampiric effort no less. Outstanding!

There's are a lot of great references to vampire lore in your piece.

It's almost time my beauty
Come with me
Into the night...

... You could almost hear the venerable Count Dracula whispering these words to entice a willing victim, beckoning her forward with a long, bony sharp-nailed digit....

Good job, sholessjo!

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013

Thanks for the nice review. I appreciate it.

Norm

Comment from DanielEkine

Excellent

Brings my mind to vampires.
Perfect artwork for your poem
Beautiful words and arrangement
Considerable thought and decision have been put into this work.
Splendid.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013

Thankk you for the nice review. It is appreciated.

Norm