Spiritual Oasis
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Heavenly Garden"a collection of spiritual poems
28 total reviews
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
Dear author,.
I walk the path of lavender and spice,
the tiger lilies show their amber eyes -
Oh, savior Lord, how peaceful and how nice
is your resplendent garden in the skies!...
Awesome job on this!!!!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
Dear author,.
I walk the path of lavender and spice,
the tiger lilies show their amber eyes -
Oh, savior Lord, how peaceful and how nice
is your resplendent garden in the skies!...
Awesome job on this!!!!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem is beautiful, ET. I love the image and the way you used flower names in your verses. This is a great tribute to your beautiful mother and her love of gardening. I believe she is in Heaven taking care of the gardens there. Yes, you and she will meet again. Great job with your lines, the rhymes, the smooth flow, and the message.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
Your poem is beautiful, ET. I love the image and the way you used flower names in your verses. This is a great tribute to your beautiful mother and her love of gardening. I believe she is in Heaven taking care of the gardens there. Yes, you and she will meet again. Great job with your lines, the rhymes, the smooth flow, and the message.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for the great review, Jan. I do hope we'll meet in the garden of Eden with my beloved mother.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the picture because I wish I could have a patio like the one in the picture. Imagine sitting out there to have a cup of coffee and watching the beautiful flowers. Such an imagination makes me feel relaxed and happy.
Thank you for sharing such a lovely poem.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
I like the picture because I wish I could have a patio like the one in the picture. Imagine sitting out there to have a cup of coffee and watching the beautiful flowers. Such an imagination makes me feel relaxed and happy.
Thank you for sharing such a lovely poem.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Alas, this is supposed to be garden in heaven. We will all get there some day.
Thanks for the great review.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Yelena,
The gardenly imagery is quite beautiful.
how marvelous the flowers array.
A wonderful tribute to your mother and her love of gardens,
how splendidly garden and Eden align.
Excellent rhyming and meter and perfect picture.
Best wishes.
Robert.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
Hello Yelena,
The gardenly imagery is quite beautiful.
how marvelous the flowers array.
A wonderful tribute to your mother and her love of gardens,
how splendidly garden and Eden align.
Excellent rhyming and meter and perfect picture.
Best wishes.
Robert.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the exceptional review and the six stars, Robert. I am honored.
Comment from Hitcher
I am not very knowledgeable when it comes to flowers But i do enjoy their beauty. I lived in the Netherlands for awhile back now and lived in the tulip growing region of the Noord oost polder. When the tulips were in full bloom people came from all around Europe to witness their beauty and follow the trail. His garden would be something else, incredible and breathtakingly beautiful. Nice!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
I am not very knowledgeable when it comes to flowers But i do enjoy their beauty. I lived in the Netherlands for awhile back now and lived in the tulip growing region of the Noord oost polder. When the tulips were in full bloom people came from all around Europe to witness their beauty and follow the trail. His garden would be something else, incredible and breathtakingly beautiful. Nice!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review.
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
A very fine poem that has beauty and grace. How nice to dedicate this to your mother. Your artwork is so very pretty and really adds to the poem. Your third verse is my favorite...it touches the senses and one can almost smell the glorious flowers.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
A very fine poem that has beauty and grace. How nice to dedicate this to your mother. Your artwork is so very pretty and really adds to the poem. Your third verse is my favorite...it touches the senses and one can almost smell the glorious flowers.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review.
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Louise Bélanger Author
What a beautiful poem and imagery. Perfect chosen words. I love your poem. I love reading, writing and talking about God. Ahh and Heaven, for sure! Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem and tribute. đ???
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
What a beautiful poem and imagery. Perfect chosen words. I love your poem. I love reading, writing and talking about God. Ahh and Heaven, for sure! Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem and tribute. đ???
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review.
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Patty Palmer
An enjoyable poem. The words are very descriptive and I was able to picture it all. The words flow easily and softly at a comfortable pace. Thanks for sharing.
Patty
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
An enjoyable poem. The words are very descriptive and I was able to picture it all. The words flow easily and softly at a comfortable pace. Thanks for sharing.
Patty
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review.
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from vpatterson222
Absolutely beautiful. Very spiritually deep. I feel the emotions.
Both of my parents have passed. I can connect with this poem.
Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
Absolutely beautiful. Very spiritually deep. I feel the emotions.
Both of my parents have passed. I can connect with this poem.
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review.
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Thank you for the great review.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from karenina
Six worthy, bit alas, it is Friday and I'm fresh out! An absolutely beautiful poem in memory of your mother, Yelena! Every line is precious... She must have been a wonderful gardener! Look at the writer she nurtured so lovingly!
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
Six worthy, bit alas, it is Friday and I'm fresh out! An absolutely beautiful poem in memory of your mother, Yelena! Every line is precious... She must have been a wonderful gardener! Look at the writer she nurtured so lovingly!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you the very sweet review.
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You are very welcome.
Karenina