Comment from zeldasmith

Excellent

This is a beautiful electrifying poem....your phrases describing loves encounter are good and visuable. I like very much. Good job, my friend.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2013

I was worried that you wouldn't like it. How is your book coming?

Norm

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

Boy this is just beautiful! So well written and expressed. Whoever you wrote this for has got to be impressed! I know I was!

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013

Thanks for the nice review. It is appreciated.

Norm

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

wow what a night of sharing love together and so romantic and I felt you wrote this well of moments journey into paradise well done

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013

Thanks for the nice review. It is appreciated.

Norm