The Night
This poem describes the mysterious beauty and magical music of the night.139 total reviews
Comment from Tina McKala
Powerful images created in each of the lines. Very poignant and engaging, you created the night's peace and calmness. Very well captured! :)
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Powerful images created in each of the lines. Very poignant and engaging, you created the night's peace and calmness. Very well captured! :)
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.I am glad that you like it.
Comment from Raver
Beautiful illustration. Beautiful poem. I like the way you described the moon as senile as it most be very, very old. Not much else to say.
Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Beautiful illustration. Beautiful poem. I like the way you described the moon as senile as it most be very, very old. Not much else to say.
Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.I appreciate it a lot.
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Your welcome.
Comment from Roshni M.W.
Your poem creates a wonderful image in such a few words. It was a pleasure to read. Your use of words such as "melting" and "lullaby" created a dreamlike image which is very well suited for the night. Great job!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Your poem creates a wonderful image in such a few words. It was a pleasure to read. Your use of words such as "melting" and "lullaby" created a dreamlike image which is very well suited for the night. Great job!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.I appreciate it a lot.
Comment from amahra
Senile moon, I love it. Great originality for the image of the moon. Great art image and the black background colors brought out the writing.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Senile moon, I love it. Great originality for the image of the moon. Great art image and the black background colors brought out the writing.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review.I appreciate it a lot.
Comment from sujo1964
Senile moon is perfect. I love this poems with as few words as possible to create a picture. It really makes you think of which words to choose, and how to put them together. You did an awesome job.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Senile moon is perfect. I love this poems with as few words as possible to create a picture. It really makes you think of which words to choose, and how to put them together. You did an awesome job.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review.
I appreciate it a lot.
Comment from lois1890
I like this haiku. It has the exact imagery attributed to the moon. I was wondering if you were saying saying senile because the moon forgets it's suppose to be gone in the morning?
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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I like this haiku. It has the exact imagery attributed to the moon. I was wondering if you were saying saying senile because the moon forgets it's suppose to be gone in the morning?
Comment Written 02-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your review..
I used the word senile because somehow
I find the moon senile.It is absolutely my personal point of view..The readers can imagine anything as they like.
Comment from BeckyW
Very good 5-7-5 poem, which to me are quite challenging. It has a sweet statement that speaks to the beauty of the night sky, and the moon in particular of course. I love the way you described the earth's shadow as the moon 'melting in the sky.' And the photo is a perfect addition to the black background of the poem. Great job:)
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Very good 5-7-5 poem, which to me are quite challenging. It has a sweet statement that speaks to the beauty of the night sky, and the moon in particular of course. I love the way you described the earth's shadow as the moon 'melting in the sky.' And the photo is a perfect addition to the black background of the poem. Great job:)
Comment Written 02-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for this lovely positive review..Appreciate it a lot.I am very glad that You have perfectly explain my thoughts behind the poem..Thanks again.
Comment from lancellot
Yes, I added it up on my stubby fingers and it is a perfect 5-7-5. The last line: Night sings a lullaby reminds of living in country where crickets and owls sing to the moon. It true that night has music all its own. Good work.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Yes, I added it up on my stubby fingers and it is a perfect 5-7-5. The last line: Night sings a lullaby reminds of living in country where crickets and owls sing to the moon. It true that night has music all its own. Good work.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Hi,
Thank you so much for this positive review.
It means a lot.
I appreciate it.
Comment from CrumE85
I'm honestly having trouble with the imagery here. The moon is forgetful or weak with old age, melting, and singing? being senile doesn't fit with singing a lullaby. Seems like serene is more likely to go with lullaby as its soothing.
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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I'm honestly having trouble with the imagery here. The moon is forgetful or weak with old age, melting, and singing? being senile doesn't fit with singing a lullaby. Seems like serene is more likely to go with lullaby as its soothing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Hi,Thank you for your honest review..And please let me explain to you as you questioned ..The moon is not singing, the night is singing, and melting is just an imagination,everyone's perception is different,it is how we look things with our mind.
Thanks again for your rating and reviewing.Appreciate it.
Comment from in777wr#
A lovely poem. Your words flows well. Great use of poetic devices in this poem. My favorite line was, "Goes melting in the sky". Great poem.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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A lovely poem. Your words flows well. Great use of poetic devices in this poem. My favorite line was, "Goes melting in the sky". Great poem.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review.I am glad that you liked the poem.
