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The Night

This poem describes the mysterious beauty and magical music of the night.

139 total reviews 
Comment from Righteous Riter
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This piece meets the criteria of the 5-7-5. The syllable count is correct as the photo compliments the piece well. This piece is short, sweet, to the point as I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
    Thank you so much for your great review.
Comment from Cookie333
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Senile moon and melting in the sky
These words created quite an image poet
So few words to create an image, that is not easy yet you have created many
Best of luck in the contest
Thank you
K

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
    You are most welcome and thank you so much for your great comment.I appreciate it.
Comment from Gungalo
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When the senile moon
Goes on melting in the sky
Night sings lullaby.

Well other than the use of the word "senile' I really like this write. It calls attention to the moon.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
    Thank you so much for your comment.
reply by Gungalo on 17-Jul-2013
    Smile
Comment from gaangel62
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What a great poem. It's amazing to me that such a short poem can have so much meaning. The artwork is perfect. Thanks for sharing...Angie

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
    Hi Angie
    Thank you so much for the lovely comment.
Comment from Artasylum
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thank goodness much rather have a lullaby than having to count sheep... keep up the 5/7/5's my favorite. Looking forward to reading more over time and thanks again. yours, diana

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
    Hi Diana
    Thank you so much for this lovely comment.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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This is a perfect 5-7-5 with perfect syllable count. You have chosen a good picture for the senile moon. Your display is well thought with a black background. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
    Thank you so much for the lovely comment.
Comment from tbacha58
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Whoa, good luck for the contest, it rings beautifully, the picture is amazing, and I am sure its a winner. Unbelievable how you could write a few words, and those words tell a story. Terry.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
    Hi Terry
    Thanks a lot for you beautiful comment and for your support.I appreciate it a lot..Firdousy
Comment from ravenblack
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Senile moon -
Well, it has been described as the old man
In the moon
And I guess phases could be seen as melting

Just thing the lullaby so would be more as a mumble fitting with the logic of senile.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
    Thank you so much for describing my little poem in such a logical way.I appeciate it.
Comment from Titan Black
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Yeah, you pulled that one off. Your poetic
alliteration was on time. And the flow of the
poem was great. Which made the poem hot.
Keep writing.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
    Thank you so much.
Comment from honeytree
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Beautifully written in every way

I love the art work very much.

I guess even the moon can become senile.

Honey tree

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
    Thank you so much for the great review.Much appeeciate it.