I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "A Partner For the Ages"Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from zeldasmith
This is a beautifully written love poem. The only suggestion would be to give your poem's background a color such as one of the colors that's in the cool looking picture....good job.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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This is a beautifully written love poem. The only suggestion would be to give your poem's background a color such as one of the colors that's in the cool looking picture....good job.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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I will try.
5 star Norman
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Thanks for all your readers.
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Norm, this poem is such a beautiful attestation to the faithfulness of a loving partner, your spouse. From your writing it is easy to know that you would do the same for her. Great write, Carolyn
PS: last verse, first line heeling - healing. (typos are never caught by spell-check) I hate it when that happens.
:-)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Norm, this poem is such a beautiful attestation to the faithfulness of a loving partner, your spouse. From your writing it is easy to know that you would do the same for her. Great write, Carolyn
PS: last verse, first line heeling - healing. (typos are never caught by spell-check) I hate it when that happens.
:-)
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks Carolyn. I made the change. How do I nominate you for reviewer of the month?
Norm
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Click on the 'thumbs' up in the review area . Thanks in advance, I appreciate that, I always try to do my best for each writer.. :-) Carolyn
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Click on the 'thumbs' up in the review area . Thanks in advance, I appreciate that, I always try to do my best for each writer.. :-) Carolyn
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Can't find the thumbs up.. If you give me a review I think it shows.
Frustrated
Comment from The Death
It is a nice try but for me,i lacks creativity in terms of words and structure.the content is good but needs fine finishing.but still a good one
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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It is a nice try but for me,i lacks creativity in terms of words and structure.the content is good but needs fine finishing.but still a good one
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the nice review. The comments are appreciated,
Norm
Comment from Ben Colder
Like a cloud, our lives move from one place to another always remembering the good and bad. Your poem is very rewarding and opens the heart to accept things of today that yesterday brought. Well done poet. I like the way it ended.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Like a cloud, our lives move from one place to another always remembering the good and bad. Your poem is very rewarding and opens the heart to accept things of today that yesterday brought. Well done poet. I like the way it ended.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the nice review. The comments are appreciated,
Norm
