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I Choose Rainbows

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Thoughts from the dark side

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Comment from zeldasmith
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I think you meant fairy TALES not tails.....other than that a nicely well written poem. I love the picture of the river. Rivers tell us a lot. I wrote a poem about a river into a song. Good job.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
    Thanks teacher. I will fix it.
reply by zeldasmith on 10-Jul-2013
    Smile. Welcome.
Comment from The Death
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It is a very beautiful poem.it creates splendid scene and words used are simple which add to the flow.
It just gives calm and soothing feeling to the mind.and yes,everyone wishes the see the heaven that dwells under the sea.well done

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
    Thanks for the nice review. The comments are appreciated,

    Norm
Comment from country ranch writer
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at the crossroads to the river you wonder where it will take you next and what will happen on the way or when you get there will it be what you wanted it to be

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
    Thanks for the nice review. The comments are appreciated,

    Norm
reply by country ranch writer on 09-Jul-2013
    welcome
reply by country ranch writer on 09-Jul-2013
    WELCOME