Comment from
zeldasmith
I think you meant fairy TALES not tails.....other than that a nicely well written poem. I love the picture of the river. Rivers tell us a lot. I wrote a poem about a river into a song. Good job.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
Thanks teacher. I will fix it.
reply by zeldasmith on 10-Jul-2013
Comment from
The Death
It is a very beautiful poem.it creates splendid scene and words used are simple which add to the flow.
It just gives calm and soothing feeling to the mind.and yes,everyone wishes the see the heaven that dwells under the sea.well done
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
Thanks for the nice review. The comments are appreciated,
Norm
Comment from
country ranch writer
at the crossroads to the river you wonder where it will take you next and what will happen on the way or when you get there will it be what you wanted it to be
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
Thanks for the nice review. The comments are appreciated,
Norm
reply by country ranch writer on 09-Jul-2013
reply by country ranch writer on 09-Jul-2013