And then there's Grace
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Just Me"A collection of Spirtual poems
12 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
What do you see
When you look at me
Integrity, sincerity, and love I pray
Is what you see in me each day
Oh that the world could see that in each and every one of us each and every day! This is perfection in message, execution, and divinely inspired meaning. Thank you for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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What do you see
When you look at me
Integrity, sincerity, and love I pray
Is what you see in me each day
Oh that the world could see that in each and every one of us each and every day! This is perfection in message, execution, and divinely inspired meaning. Thank you for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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And thank you for reading and enjoying this simple poem. I appreciate you. :-) Carolyn
Comment from 9999pool
When we look at ourselves we begin to wonder whether what we are doing is right or correct - the way we speak, act and do.
Sometimes we tried so hard to be the person we want to be but within certain boundaries and constraints we do feel torn between what is right and what is correct to do.
We are not sure at times if our deeds are done in good faith and the repercussions to be expected.
So we pray and pray very hard that God will show us the way in our hearts.
Great write and well penned.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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When we look at ourselves we begin to wonder whether what we are doing is right or correct - the way we speak, act and do.
Sometimes we tried so hard to be the person we want to be but within certain boundaries and constraints we do feel torn between what is right and what is correct to do.
We are not sure at times if our deeds are done in good faith and the repercussions to be expected.
So we pray and pray very hard that God will show us the way in our hearts.
Great write and well penned.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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What you have said is so true...torn between what is right and what is correct.. I would rather be right with God, than correct with the world.. Aren't we fortunate that He gives us His word to show us the right way. Ritchie, thank you so much for this wonderful review and your sincere comments about 'Just Me'. :-) Carolyn
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Hi Carolyn,
By now you will know that i do read in-between the lines. Even when the Bible speaks in parables (similar to poetry), I have this ability to understand its meaning quite well somehow - I treat it as parable poetry, smiles.
The things i wrote in my reviews amazes me as well after they are written. Yes, correct and right are totally in antagonism at times and Just me is a beautiful write which i enjoyed. Your poems maybe simple in form but the meaning which comes from your heart is spiritual as God speaks to our minds too when we write spiritually.
Cheerio, good night and have a good rest.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
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smile..
Comment from NicciFaye
What people see when they look at you and me is VERY important, especially if you are a child of God...there are some people that say, well I don't care what people think of me...when if you are a child of God...you should care to a certain point that care should be that you are a great example of Christlikeness...beautiful poem...beautiful.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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What people see when they look at you and me is VERY important, especially if you are a child of God...there are some people that say, well I don't care what people think of me...when if you are a child of God...you should care to a certain point that care should be that you are a great example of Christlikeness...beautiful poem...beautiful.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thank you for 'getting' this one. You always seem to do that.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Simple, but beautiful, Carolyn.
Author's notes: "it's just me" :), yes, and the "it's just me" shines through in this sweet write. Love the message ... striving to be the best that you can be and to always try and do what is right.
You got it right with this write! I enjoyed this very much.
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Simple, but beautiful, Carolyn.
Author's notes: "it's just me" :), yes, and the "it's just me" shines through in this sweet write. Love the message ... striving to be the best that you can be and to always try and do what is right.
You got it right with this write! I enjoyed this very much.
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks Connie, have a great day.. :-) Carolyn
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Thanks, you have a great day too, Carolyn! :)
Connie
Comment from jmdg1954
Carolyn... Most times the best written piece comes when it just pours out and you can't stop. So punctuation and pentameters can fly away with the kites when you write from off the cuff...
Nicely done and I'm sure whoever sees you everyday sees the wonderful person you appear to be!!! Enjoy your day, John
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Carolyn... Most times the best written piece comes when it just pours out and you can't stop. So punctuation and pentameters can fly away with the kites when you write from off the cuff...
Nicely done and I'm sure whoever sees you everyday sees the wonderful person you appear to be!!! Enjoy your day, John
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks John, yes, I must admit this one was edited less than most. :-) I am glad you 'know' me too. Carolyn
Comment from Darkhorse555
from the picture shadow of a heavenly nature in gods light your piece shines bright in his piece love the prayer I enjoyed
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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from the picture shadow of a heavenly nature in gods light your piece shines bright in his piece love the prayer I enjoyed
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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I appreciate your comments and happy you enjoyed this, Carolyn
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend so many questions in this poem and all questions people ask everyday what do you see in me well done a very creative writing regards Jill
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hello my friend so many questions in this poem and all questions people ask everyday what do you see in me well done a very creative writing regards Jill
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks Jill for reading and liking. Carolyn
Comment from amarherig14
You are following what the Word says about a believer. You should be the best you can be so others can see Jesus in you. Each day brings the opportunity for us to the best person we can be.Good rhyme and a beautiful picture to present your poem.A good message to ponder on.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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You are following what the Word says about a believer. You should be the best you can be so others can see Jesus in you. Each day brings the opportunity for us to the best person we can be.Good rhyme and a beautiful picture to present your poem.A good message to ponder on.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Your comments are always a blessing to me. Thank you, Carolyn
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You are welcome,Carolyn. Thanks for your uplifting comment. Blessings always , Margie.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
I like your Quatrains in rhyming couplets. A very nice poem. I think you did a great job in writing it. I loved every word of it.
Blessings, Kat
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hi Carolyn,
I like your Quatrains in rhyming couplets. A very nice poem. I think you did a great job in writing it. I loved every word of it.
Blessings, Kat
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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I am glad you enjoyed it. Smiles to you, have a great day, Carolyn
Comment from donette1914
outstanding of your poem of just me and i love your ending When you look at me
Integrity, sincerity, and love I pray
Is what you see in me each day
simply beautiful
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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outstanding of your poem of just me and i love your ending When you look at me
Integrity, sincerity, and love I pray
Is what you see in me each day
simply beautiful
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the wonderful review of this one. I am glad you liked it. Have a great day, Carolyn