Comment from CammyCards

Excellent

To the lust of a flesh wOrn thin... maybe? Lovely language, lovely flow to this self-analytic poem. Thank you for using my photo to illustrate your story.
CammyCards

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013

Your photo is perfect for this type poem. Thanks a bunch.

Norm

Comment from zeldasmith

Excellent

Good work. The pic is good and seems to fit the poem. It is sad when we have to face our demons but in doing so God is there helping us come to terms with ourselves. Nice job poet.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013

I really hope you win reviewer of the month.

reply by zeldasmith on 08-Jul-2013

Thank you so much for your kindness.

Comment from Dickleeshia

Excellent

Desecration.
Deterioration
Demotion.
Demolition.
Disintegration.
Indignation!
What a pitiful journey from the mountaintops to being swallowed by vermins in hell!
Well, sometimes we fall prey to circumstances beyond our control.
But it doesn't matter how many times we fell but how you managed to stand up every time we succumb...

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013

Thanks for the review. I had a period of deep depression that has passed.

Norm