Comment from zeldasmith

Excellent

I certainly hope you're past the black in your life. Rights? Only people who've wanted to end their life can relate to words you've posted. Only we can feel the mental pain of those who suffer depression. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013

Hi: I wrote about thiry depressed poems when I was ill. It is past me now.

reply by zeldasmith on 06-Jul-2013

Thanks be to God!

Comment from Lady Veloce

Good

Although the words you used at the beginning of the poem were a bit overpowering, I thoroughly enjoyed the middle stanza in which you placed only a word in two lines.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013

Thanks for the review. They poem was meant to have a touch of humorto it.

Norm

Comment from ShatiaBizzell

Excellent

This piece has great structure and placement. I enjoyed every line, word from word. It keep me intrigued and wondering how it was going to end. One thing that grab my attention was how the piece resembled the experience of someone I love. I don't think I could have done it any better.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013

It is amazing thaty people don't depression poetry even ifthey are funny. Thanks for the review.

Norm

Comment from Insane Membrane

Average

there are so many depression poems , they seem good because they are depressing ( I think) I can feel the spiralling down I hope its just a poem ???

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013

Hi: I posted the poem with notification that it was depressing. Why did you bother to read it. No one enjoys three stars.

Norm

reply by Insane Membrane on 05-Jul-2013

Really ? you sound like Eeyore ,well done

reply by Insane Membrane on 05-Jul-2013

you sound so sad xxx hugz I thought my review was quite complimentary though and I am new here and unsure of how the ratings work

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013

Hi: The subject matter should should not count in the rating. The average poem, without grammatical or mixed up verses, goes for a 5 star review. You have given me the only 3 that I have ever recieved. I normally get fives and sixes.I would appreciate it if you would reconsider the low rating. Depression poems have emotional ties as do love poems. They express emotion as well as any other poem.

Thanks,

Norm