Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

This one is tops. I love the picture you have chosen to compliment the outstanding poem. It flows with clarity and the ending is superb, it is good to be alive. :-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013

Thanks for the feedback on the rating system. I question though, what is a good poem and what is an excellent poem. It seems that everyone who submits a poem gets a five star rating which makes them average. Keep reading. I love your comments andrespect your poetic mind.

Norm

Comment from The Death

Excellent

The write has imagery which is breathtaking,leaves a soothing effect on the reader's mind.
Your word selection is apt and makes the narration very effective,taking one along to witness that beauty.you did an excellent job.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013

Thanks for the kind review. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Norm

Comment from Black_Oxygen

Excellent

This poetry is well written. The flow is fluid and the
reader-friendly language makes it easy to comprehend.
The words are descriptive and it paints vivid images.
The attached illustration is a nice accent that enhances
the message. Thank You for your creation.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind review. What would it take to improve the poem.