Comment from olivia22

Average

Hey, what happened after you saw the rain. The cow was in chain with pain so i thought the rain came to offer a solution for the cow. great work anyway.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013

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Comment from Martin Chan

Excellent

A good 5-7-5 poem " A bad cow " . Knowing that the poem is written in a minute it is a wonderful write with a good thinking.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013

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Comment from Antonin70

Excellent

kept to the prompt well and described a scene with colour and conviction. Sticking to such short syllable limits is always difficult, but you did a good job. Anton

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013

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Comment from firdousy

Excellent

Hey little poet you have done a very good work.Your poem is very funny and I like it.But dear you have used 8 syllable instead of 7 syllables in the second line of the poem.so please take a look.You are a very good writer.All the best.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013

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Comment from Kingsland

Good

I actually liked what the poem had to say. But it didn't conform to the format of the contest rules. So that is why I could not give this a five star review... John

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013

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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Average

A cat was in my hat 6
so I kicked it out of my hat 8
with a fat bat so from then I know cats are bad 12
the syllable count is wrong for this form so I suggest a rewrite there are many examples in my work to give you an idea regards Jill

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013

I changed my poem.