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Comment from DRG24
I really like this great job with this awesome fivea!!!!!!!!!!! Great job again!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for supporting my format with this poem!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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I really like this great job with this awesome fivea!!!!!!!!!!! Great job again!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for supporting my format with this poem!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thanks DRG3024
Comment from sunnilicious
Both the red and blue are so bright. It aches my eyesight. Love the artwork. It's so patriotic.
Wonderful poem as it pays tribute to some wonderful men that helped build a great country. Nice form repeated. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Both the red and blue are so bright. It aches my eyesight. Love the artwork. It's so patriotic.
Wonderful poem as it pays tribute to some wonderful men that helped build a great country. Nice form repeated. Excellent work.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious. I'll see if I can tone it down.
Comment from NicciFaye
Excellent 5A suite....beautifully written....great message....always look to your work for variety.....I would only say the blue letters on red always make the picture look bright neon when reading it...like staring at a sun to long without shades....
Beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Excellent 5A suite....beautifully written....great message....always look to your work for variety.....I would only say the blue letters on red always make the picture look bright neon when reading it...like staring at a sun to long without shades....
Beautiful poem.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Thanks Nicci.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Good noon, Treischel,
This 5A poem is excellent. It meets 5 syllable/line/3line requirement and then some. There is alliteration in all lines.
It expresses a noble sentiment. I enjoyed this read.
Preston
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Good noon, Treischel,
This 5A poem is excellent. It meets 5 syllable/line/3line requirement and then some. There is alliteration in all lines.
It expresses a noble sentiment. I enjoyed this read.
Preston
Comment Written 04-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Thank you Preston. Tried to work in Enlightenment, but couldn't think of a appropriate one syllable word to go with the sentiment. I guess "earned" would have worked. Why don't you use iron one?
Comment from Capricorn30
A well-penned history lesson as a nation reflects on yesterday's events for today's liberties.
I like the creative concept of several stanzas in the alliterative-only poem--I must attempt this!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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A well-penned history lesson as a nation reflects on yesterday's events for today's liberties.
I like the creative concept of several stanzas in the alliterative-only poem--I must attempt this!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Thanks Capricorn. Yes,Do it! I know you will write a good one!
Comment from The Death
It is a well penned series of 5A..a really good concept used for a very good cause.
The syllable count and alliteration is fine throught.i like how you keep trying for various forms and that too with such good skills.i enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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It is a well penned series of 5A..a really good concept used for a very good cause.
The syllable count and alliteration is fine throught.i like how you keep trying for various forms and that too with such good skills.i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 04-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Thank you Anuoam. I try not to get boring.
