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A (modified) Shakespearean sonnet of cursed enchantment94 total reviews
Comment from Opal H.
Wow, what a great take on that artwork for the contest!! It goes perfectly with all the elements of it, and adds a mysterious charm to it too!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Wow, what a great take on that artwork for the contest!! It goes perfectly with all the elements of it, and adds a mysterious charm to it too!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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thx Opal! :)Sharyn
Comment from GregoryCody
OOOOH nice! This is Amazing. I love your closing couplet. I had no idea sonnets could be dark! I have some more sonnet ideas then. I thought they all had to be about love. I mean they are love but it can be dark too? Only love right? Well either way, this has perfect meter (thanks for curse ed note). Your "twist" was great. Summary great. Metaphors terrific. Each stanza fits requirements perfectly. Well done again S. Crazily talented. Amazing. Really. Not just saying that. This was good. Should be allowed a six...
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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OOOOH nice! This is Amazing. I love your closing couplet. I had no idea sonnets could be dark! I have some more sonnet ideas then. I thought they all had to be about love. I mean they are love but it can be dark too? Only love right? Well either way, this has perfect meter (thanks for curse ed note). Your "twist" was great. Summary great. Metaphors terrific. Each stanza fits requirements perfectly. Well done again S. Crazily talented. Amazing. Really. Not just saying that. This was good. Should be allowed a six...
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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aaah, hoped you'd like this one! I'm blushing again ... I actually started writing something completely different today (ironically, an ode - to procrastination) - but people kept coming and talking to me, so I pretended to be asleep and thought of this painting that's been bugging me for weeks ... Hey, Tom's now throwing a six-party, so we can now give FOUR sixes instead of only TWO to faves per month. Yippee!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, visionary, you did an excellent job writing this heartfelt sonnet about the betrayal that caused a tempest to rise to take the betrayer to a watery grave. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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this is very well written, visionary, you did an excellent job writing this heartfelt sonnet about the betrayal that caused a tempest to rise to take the betrayer to a watery grave. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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thx so much sweets! I had some dark fun with this one, hmm?
Comment from bossladyone
I like it. The poem is well written and flows nicely. The picture and color scheme add to the impact of the poem. As I read it I thought about Davie Jones. Thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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I like it. The poem is well written and flows nicely. The picture and color scheme add to the impact of the poem. As I read it I thought about Davie Jones. Thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Davie Jones was there as well, bosslady - I'll take bets on it! :)Sharyn
