Comment from writer530

Excellent

Good job on "Tinkerbelle! Like how you expressed all the calm and tenderness, as well as "gold dust" sprinkled on everyone. Light-hearted and fun!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2013

Thanks for the nce revue.

Norm

reply by writer530 on 04-Jul-2013

You're welcome!

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Your poem is good and flows well. I thought of my granddaughter and how life she brings as if sunshine when ever she comes .This poem is one of a kind. Well done poet.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013

Thanks for the kind review. Does the picture go with the words?

reply by Ben Colder on 01-Jul-2013

very much so

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Her existence in making and leading our lives to a colourful and golden state of living, she is omnipresent and she is the sunshine of our hearts so well exaltation in nice flow of thoughts, star is worded well. 16/701

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013

Thanks for the kind revue. Does the picture go with the poem?

Comment from zeldasmith

Excellent

Sounds like you are speaking fondly of your mother. When I read the poem I thought of my mom. Well written, but needs a picture and back ground color. You can do this comlemtary of FanStory before you post. Do it!

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013

The name of the poem is really Tinkerbell. I can't type and don't know how to correct the error.

reply by zeldasmith on 02-Jul-2013

Well, maybe dad called her tinker bell. You are so silly. Most word processors in computers practically do the fixing' for you. Now don't tell me you don't have a computer because I won't believe it. I'm stickicking out my tongue. Have a great day.

reply by the author on 02-Jul-2013

Hi: You are my teacher. Where are the boo boos? I used spell check.

A friend

reply by zeldasmith on 02-Jul-2013

For tinkerbell? No boo boos.

Comment from bossladyone

Excellent

I like the poem. It is well written and flows nicely. A nice tribute to Gleda Perkins. The way you discribe her you can tell it was with a great deal of emotion. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013

Thanks for the review. It is appreciated.

Oorm

Comment from Cry the Vile Rebel

Excellent

You have captured your awestrucked-ness quite well in this poem. It's amazing, is it not, how much we are changed by this kind of love?

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013

Thanks for the review. It is appreciated.

Oorm